More and more companies allow their employees to work from home or “remotely” rather than going into an office each day.
Do the advantages of this policy outweigh the disadvantages?
In this present instance, an enormous number of firms are allowing their employees to work of telecommuting instead of going into the business office. According to me, it is more beneficial than being disadvantageous. Both the benefits and disadvantages will be analyzed further.
Discussing the merits of working from home, the foremost advantage is that employees will feel comfortable. To illustrate this, home is the place where peace can be found, and work can be done in casual cloth such as nightdress. There is no need to wear formal cloth. Another fruitful outcome of the telecommuting is that pollution will be decreased. Elaborating it more, transportation is not needed, while working from home. As a result, the number of usages in fuel for vehicles will be decreased dramatically.
Furthermore, Employees can spend more time with their family, when they spend the whole of the day working from home. To be more specific, the dieting system will improve, as home members keep an eye on the working person's eating habits, and this develops a healthy relationship between family. Additionally, work can be done at any time, when workers want to do. This can improve health if one is suffering from a cold or any kind of disease.
However, I would not overlook the dark side too. The first and foremost one is that expenditure on internet and computers may be paid by the employee. As a result, companies are not giving money for the internet and other equipment which are needed while home-workers working from home.
To conclude, although there are very few demerits of working from home, more benefits are the comfort of an employee and a reduction in pollution.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 152, Rule ID: ACCORDING_TO_ME[1]
Message: This phrase can sound awkward in English. Consider using 'in my opinion' or 'I think'.
Suggestion: In my opinion; I think
...tead of going into the business office. According to me, it is more beneficial than being disad...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, however, if, look, may, so, while, kind of, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 13.1623246493 167% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1408.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 280.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.02857142857 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09062348924 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88083037916 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.578571428571 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 439.2 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 2.10420841683 333% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.6296834904 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.8235294118 106.682146367 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.4705882353 20.7667163134 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.94117647059 7.06120827912 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.3349163584 0.244688304435 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101269304026 0.084324248473 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0876096794246 0.0667982634062 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.192990822466 0.151304729494 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0617656888104 0.056905535591 109% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 13.0946893788 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.26 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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