Some people think that developed countries have a higher responsibility to combat climate change than developing countries. Others believe that all countries should have the same responsibilities towards protecting the environment.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Write at least 250 words.
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Climate change is becoming a major concern among all the nations worldwide. Melting of ice glaciers and rising sea level is causing a constant threat to the whole world. While some people argue that it is the responsibility of developed countries to take some serious actions to fight climate change, there are others who believe that all countries need to participate equally. In this essay I will discuss both the views and present my opinion about this issue.
Beyond any qualms developed countries are more powerful in terms of technology as well as financial means which mean that they are more equipped to understand and fight climate change that is causing serious threats including depleting ozone layer, melting of glaciers and rising sea level increasing chances of drowning of certain islands. Additionally, they have already overcome basic issues such as eliminating poverty and epidemics caused due to low socio-economic conditions. A salient example is Netherland where the government has special laws to promote the use of environment friendly vehicles such as electric motors and solar powered bikes. They have reduced the tax on these vehicles which in turns prevents carbon mono-oxide emissions on a large scale in turn significantly reducing air pollution. Therefore, developed countries are in a better position in terms of technological advancement and finances to fight climate changes.
On the contrary, others argue that all countries including developing countries should participate equally for fighting environmental changes. Participation of these countries will accelerate the efforts and thus the impact will be more powerful when all the countries will participate together. Also, participation of developing countries in fighting this common goal will increase the awareness in these countries for taking useful steps in the right direction.
However, I believe that all the countries should participate equally to fight the common enemy. Why should the hard earned money collected from the taxes of the people residing in developed countries be only utilized for fighting climate change when all the countries have an equal contribution in causing environmental pollution and climatic changes. Even if they try to make their contribution, the results will only appear when all the countries show equal participation.
In conclusion, I believe that all the nations need to look for serious answers to fight global warming and environmental changes. It is not the sole responsibility of developed nations to curb this worldwide issue. However, will this issue be taken seriously by the government of poor nations? Still remains a question.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, look, so, still, therefore, thus, well, while, in conclusion, such as, as well as, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2266.0 1615.20841683 140% => OK
No of words: 413.0 315.596192385 131% => OK
Chars per words: 5.48668280872 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.50803742585 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93781740836 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 213.0 176.041082164 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.515738498789 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 702.9 506.74238477 139% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 69.6292516618 49.4020404114 141% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.263157895 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.7368421053 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.42105263158 7.06120827912 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.379521393996 0.244688304435 155% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.115462870976 0.084324248473 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.100709763907 0.0667982634062 151% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.21593293066 0.151304729494 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0879340308322 0.056905535591 155% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 13.0946893788 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.56 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.77 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 107.0 78.4519038076 136% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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