Now-a-days many people choose to be self-employed, rather than work for a company. Why might this be the case? What could be the disadvantage of being self-employed?
In modern era, the essence of time management has lost its glory. People have started believing that
a greater number of hours, they put in their respective job or work would lead to fulfilment of their
life goals. And thus, the importance of living a happy life by the way of indulging in leisure activities
has been given away. For livelihood, every human is required to work but this shouldn’t be at the
cost of letting away the activities which makes one feel light and happier.
‘Work is life and life is work’ holds truth for many people, specifically the ones who get to follow
their passion and enter into the same professional field, which also become a source of their
income. For them happiness is attained by the way of performing their jobs, this not only make them
feel satiable, but also provide an edge over the general public in terms of overall success, financial
stability and high standard of living. One of the best-selling book ‘Ekigai’ revolves around the term
‘Ekigai’ which means ‘the purpose of life’, the book very well explains that the people live a longer,
happier and successful life, only if they follow a profession, work or job which gives them immense
pleasure and satisfaction.
But for general public, the case may not be the same and in order to live their lives and earn
handsomely, they are bound to put in more long hours and let-go the leisure activities which brings
peace, calmness and pleasure to cope up with their stressful lives. Over the period, this really would
hampers their health and they end up suffering from various medical issue like stress, depression,
anxiousness which further lead to life threatening diseases like Blood pressure, diabetes,
cardiovascular and neuro functional issues.
To recapitulate, time management is significant in human life, thus people should take out time for
performing activities that brings relaxation and happiness, which further could add up to their
productivity levels at work.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 50, Rule ID: GENERAL_XX[1]
Message: Use simply 'public'.
Suggestion: public
...able, but also provide an edge over the general public in terms of overall success, financial ...
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Line 14, column 9, Rule ID: GENERAL_XX[1]
Message: Use simply 'public'.
Suggestion: public
...se pleasure and satisfaction. But for general public, the case may not be the same and in or...
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Line 17, column 1, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'would' requires the base form of the verb: 'hamper'
Suggestion: hamper
...es. Over the period, this really would hampers their health and they end up suffering ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, really, so, thus, well, by the way
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 10.4138276553 182% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1700.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 330.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.15151515152 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26214759535 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.680912362 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.584848484848 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 504.9 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 33.0 20.2975951904 163% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 72.4737193747 49.4020404114 147% => OK
Chars per sentence: 170.0 106.682146367 159% => OK
Words per sentence: 33.0 20.7667163134 159% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.4 7.06120827912 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 22.0 4.38176352705 502% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.109476734547 0.244688304435 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0460184860831 0.084324248473 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0434169133362 0.0667982634062 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0313099911339 0.151304729494 21% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0490276458978 0.056905535591 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.3 13.0946893788 147% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.44 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.18 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.01 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.2 10.1190380762 150% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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