The plans below show a student room for two people and a student room for one person at an Australian university.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The following are the two schemes illustrates the accommodation provided to the students at an Australian University. The two room schemes are distinguished as double shared and single shared.
Overall, of both the schemes, basic furniture and amenities are provided in both the rooms. It is conspicuous that single shared is much more spacious than double shared.
Dimensions of double-shared room is about 6 meters in length and 4 meters in width. The charges of this plan is about $350 per week. This room plan is provided with a bookshelf, television, two beds and study desks, stove, sink, microwave, a set of table and chairs and two cupboards and along with a attached bathroom.
Size of single-shared room is about 6 meters in length and 2.5 meters in width. The weekly charges of this room is about $200/week. A key is provided separately for both the rooms. Whereas, single-shared room is equipped with lesser furniture than double-shared but amenities are equal for both the rooms. To be specific, bookshelf, cupboard, set of table and chairs, are not included in the scheme of student room for one person.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, whereas
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 7.0 214% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 33.7804878049 71% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 940.0 965.302439024 97% => OK
No of words: 187.0 196.424390244 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.02673796791 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69794460899 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90523494055 2.65546596893 109% => OK
Unique words: 93.0 106.607317073 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.497326203209 0.547539520022 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 274.5 283.868780488 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 8.94146341463 134% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 22.4926829268 67% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.8251064247 43.030603864 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.3333333333 112.824112599 69% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.5833333333 22.9334400587 68% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.66666666667 5.23603664747 32% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.09268292683 195% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.209434496266 0.215688989381 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0835245838245 0.103423049105 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0666878790076 0.0843802449381 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12953102053 0.15604864568 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0847308575754 0.0819641961636 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 13.2329268293 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 61.2550243902 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 10.3012195122 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 11.4140731707 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.5 8.06136585366 93% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 40.7170731707 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.4329268293 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.9970731707 73% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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