Shopping is the favorite pastime for most of the young people.
Why do you think is that?
Do you think they should be encouraged to do some other useful activities?
The young generation prefers to spend their leisure time doing shopping. This essay will highlight various factors that are behind this tendency, followed by some other activities which beget benefits for the youngsters in the upcoming paragraphs.
There are multiple reasons why youth like to go to shopping malls in their free time. First of all, mass advertisement on social and print media is the major reason behind the attraction of young people towards shopping malls. Many advertising companies target the young generation to increase their sales as youngsters are impulsive buyers. Secondly, peer pressure is another important factor which effect buying behavior. People often feel the need to keep up with the most modern technical gadgets, and to keep up with the images among society. This, in turn, impacts how we spend our hard-earned dollars.
Young people should be motivated to take part in healthy activities. Firstly, a healthy mind strives in a healthy body, so sport is the best option to pass free time. Physical activities such as sports and games work as stress relievers. As games will keep their mind and body, fresh and active, this way they can perform better in their academic career and life as well. Secondly, young adults should volunteer themselves in non-profit organizations because these organizations work for the betterment of poor and needy people. Therefore, they will get the opportunity to stay between financially deprived people, which enables them to understand the importance of hard-earned money.
To sum up, as a result of advertisements and intensive socializing, youngsters love to shop when they are free. However, they should be bucked up to do sports and unpaid jobs.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 177, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...bucked up to do sports and unpaid jobs.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, such as, as a result, first of all, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1456.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 276.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.27536231884 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07593519647 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71607697683 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.634057971014 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 427.5 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.0500953535 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.0 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.25 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0625 7.06120827912 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.191078217933 0.244688304435 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0588379846257 0.084324248473 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0558160539619 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121186508825 0.151304729494 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0380284897549 0.056905535591 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.05 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.0 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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