You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
The plans below show a student room for two people and a student room for one person at an Australian university.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
You should write at least 150 words.
The two architectural designs illustrate the details of student accommodation plans, one is for two pupils and the other is only for one in a university of Australia.
Overall, both the apartment has all the necessary amenities but the shared apartment has a few more amenities than the single one. In regard to the size of those accommodations, the lengths are exactly same for both of them as opposed to the width, which is obviously more for the double one. In addition, per weekly rental difference is only $50.
Given close look at shared accommodation for students, the facility is 6 meters in length and 4 meters in width with lots of amenities. Although the students have to share bathroom, kitchen and common area, there is a additional round table and two chairs in the common space, a well sized bookshelf and two spacious cupboards for two roommates. However, bedroom one is more well shaped, built with a window and has more space in comparison to bedroom two, which does not has any window and obviously congested with furniture.
On the other hand, coming to the single facility, the size is generous, length and width are 6 and 2.5 meters respectively. Like the shared apartment, it is also furnished with bed, study desk, television and all the kitchen amenities like stove, microwave and sink. Moreover, the rent for the single accommodation will be a bit higher and whoever own the apartment will have to pay $25 more per week than their peers of shared facility.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...n a university of Australia. Overall, both the apartment has all the necessary...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...partment has all the necessary amenities but the shared apartment has a few more ...
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Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...room, kitchen and common area, there is a additional round table and two chairs i...
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Message: Did you mean 'have'? As 'do' is already inflected, the verb cannot also be inflected.
Suggestion: have
...mparison to bedroom two, which does not has any window and obviously congested with...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, look, moreover, so, well, in addition, in regard to, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.0 171% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 6.8 191% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 33.7804878049 80% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 3.97073170732 227% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1237.0 965.302439024 128% => OK
No of words: 255.0 196.424390244 130% => OK
Chars per words: 4.85098039216 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99608801488 3.73543355544 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7443808587 2.65546596893 103% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 106.607317073 129% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.537254901961 0.547539520022 98% => OK
syllable_count: 387.0 283.868780488 136% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 22.4926829268 111% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.9068916354 43.030603864 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.7 112.824112599 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.5 22.9334400587 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.4 5.23603664747 180% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 3.70975609756 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.150892951991 0.215688989381 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0601445224458 0.103423049105 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0682191071222 0.0843802449381 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.111191034363 0.15604864568 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0767832460836 0.0819641961636 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.2329268293 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 61.2550243902 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.3012195122 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.15 11.4140731707 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.16 8.06136585366 101% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 40.7170731707 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.4329268293 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.9970731707 109% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.