Governments should spend money on railways rather than roads.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Some people believe that the authority should invest more budget to rail than roadways. Although railways bring some benefits for people, personally I think the government expenditure should be poured into roadways for many reasons, which will be outlined in this essay. On the one hand, the idea that the national leaders ought to inject money into railways for many reasons. The greatest advantage of railways transport is that it is the most dependable mode of transport as it is the least affected by the weather conditions such as rains, fog etc. compared to other modes of transport. For example, you are going to plan for a long trip, however if that day has the bad weather, you will have to cancel your trip if you book the other ways of transport except train. Besides, railway is the safest form of transport as the chances of accidents and breakdowns of railways are minimum as compared to other modes of transport. Based on the information gathered from all parts of the world, you can see that almost the accidents are caused by other ways of transport but it is really rare by the train. However, Nowadays, improving roadway is an essential and urgent problem. In many big cities, people are facing miserably the traffic congestion. Because the main road is too small to meet a large number of vehicles. For example, in rush hour in Ho Chi Minh city, hundreds of people rush out of their homes to go to work, school or private business which caused serious traffic jams. Hence to offload this problem the government need to expand the traffic ways. In addition, to increase the level of safety and reduce the accidents the authorities need to improve the road quality. For example, in Vietnam the number of road accidents is ever-increasing because there are a lots of holes on the road’s surface. So raising the quality of road is a top priority. In conclusion, although the railways help people travel fast, I strongly believe that the government’s budget should be invested in developing roadways.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: “Because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
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Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
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Suggestion: Hence,
...ness which caused serious traffic jams. Hence to offload this problem the government ...
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Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a lot' or simply 'lots'?
Suggestion: a lot; lots
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, hence, however, if, really, so, for example, i think, in addition, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1674.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 346.0 315.596192385 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.83815028902 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31289638616 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60664802373 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.549132947977 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 505.8 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.6055374407 49.4020404114 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.4705882353 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3529411765 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.05882352941 7.06120827912 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.38176352705 23% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.166990124961 0.244688304435 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.049687436958 0.084324248473 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0341427674427 0.0667982634062 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.166990124961 0.151304729494 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.056905535591 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.0946893788 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.79 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.33 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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