Some people spend their entire lives in one place. Others move a number of times throughout their lives, looking for a better job, house, community, or even climate. Which do you prefer: staying in one place or moving in search of another place?
Although we think that humans can support huge changings, sometimes we have situations which our feelings demonstrate a very particular behavior from each one. Some people prefer to stay in a city where they live since they were born, because for them it is very important to be around their families and friends. However, I prefer to move for a new city for two different reasons.
First, I believe that we just have few chances on Earth to discover new things. Since I was a child, I love to have new challenges to entertain myself. When we have family and friends around us, things get easier because we have someone who we trust to help us. On the other hand, living alone or in a different place, can make us better people because we need to find solutions for each problem or challenge. As an example, when I was thinking that nothing could move me from the city that I was living, I accepted a new challenge to move to the United States. Having again the feeling to be challenged was awesome.
Secondly, sometimes we can find a good job very far from our city which gives us a possibility for an amazing new opportunity. Depending on what specific area we work, it is better to move to achieve a better position on our career. Just after my graduation, I had a good chance to move from Rio de Janeiro to the Southest of Brazil. A new culture, new people, and a fantastic challenge helped me to get my best decision. Honestly, it was the best choice because I could develop my professional skills because I went to a place with excellent dairies.
To conclude, I prefer to move from one city to other just to have good things in life to discover. We never know when is the last time and we have to be prepared for each new challenge or opportunity. That’s the way that I like to live.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, honestly, however, if, second, secondly, so, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 13.8261648746 51% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 49.0 43.0788530466 114% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 52.1666666667 84% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1473.0 1977.66487455 74% => OK
No of words: 331.0 407.700716846 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.4501510574 4.8611393121 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26537283232 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53789382492 2.67179642975 95% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 212.727598566 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.513595166163 0.524837075471 98% => OK
syllable_count: 477.9 618.680645161 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.1798149109 48.9658058833 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.6470588235 100.406767564 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4705882353 20.6045352989 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.05882352941 5.45110844103 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 11.8709677419 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.179935511222 0.236089414692 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.062948574674 0.076458572812 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0563421809295 0.0737576698707 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127142932068 0.150856017488 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0384734169837 0.0645574589148 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 11.7677419355 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 58.1214874552 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.1575268817 82% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.53 10.9000537634 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.39 8.01818996416 92% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 86.8835125448 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.