The environmental problems facing today's world are so great that there is little ordinary people can do to improve the situation. So governments and large organizations should be responsible for reducing the amount of damage being done to the environment. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Humankind is facing a wide range of environmental challenges nowadays that lead to the feeling of helplessness in many people. They think that there is nothing that little ordinary people can do to improve the situation but the government and large companies must take the responsibilities. In my personal views, I completely disagree with this opinion and I believe only if individuals take some actions could environmental contamination be effectively alleviated.
On the one hand, solving environmental problems needs large budgets and various technologies, and the government and big firms have the ability to deal with these problems. For example, the government can implement eco-friendly policies and regulations to cut down the contamination and pollution. Similarly, corporations should enhance their technologies such as a proper waste treatment system to reduce chemical hazards in the air, water and land. These actions can really reduce the damage and help to achieve sustainable development.
On the other hand, I am of the opinion that unless we human beings take some actions, the pollution of our surroundings could be a chronic issue to cope with and there are a lot of deeds that individuals might probably adopt to reduce the negative effects on the environment. Firstly, it is possible for citizens to enhance their own awareness of being friendly to their living places. For example, people should change their daily habits such as using public transportation instead of personal vehicles, reducing household wastes or replacing plastic material with biodegradable packaging when we go shopping. As a result, this will eliminate the vast amount of fossil waste that is going into the food sources of animal pieces every day.
In conclusion, it is the whole society’s responsibility to improve the situations and protect the environment. In terms of individuals, efforts and attempts are also an integral part of the aim to create a better living environment.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 220, Rule ID: ADOPT_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'adapt to'?
Suggestion: adapt to
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, really, similarly, so, for example, in conclusion, such as, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.3376753507 204% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1679.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 311.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.39871382637 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19942759058 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.15220140432 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.610932475884 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 528.3 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.6005344503 49.4020404114 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.153846154 106.682146367 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.9230769231 20.7667163134 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.30769230769 7.06120827912 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.282216694845 0.244688304435 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0873126009057 0.084324248473 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0583876393473 0.0667982634062 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.15153154603 0.151304729494 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0398865929319 0.056905535591 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.0 13.0946893788 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.34 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.09 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 9.78957915832 158% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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