One of the consequences of improved medical care is that people are living longer and life expectancy is increasing.
Do you think the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?
Recent decades have witnessed tremendous achievement in medical treatment. While it is believed that the advancement of health care offers a noticeable contribution to the lifespan of human beings, I would hold that this would bring more harm than good.
To begin with, medicine and advanced remedies help people to recover from fatal diseases rapidly. For example, antibacterial medicine has pushed back countless contagious epidemic and pandemic such as chickenpox and HIV. Nevertheless, mother nature will inevitably produce more lethal viruses with stronger immunities adapting to medicine because people are going against natural law. As can be seen recently, the globe continues to experience a new contagious pandemic outbreak - CoviD 19, which has killed thousands of people from all over the world. Therefore, medication is not always equal to health care and in harmony with nature.
Furthermore, longevity gives people more time to enjoy life as well as to devote their labor to society for a longer time. For instance, the age of retirement is gradually increasing each year. On the other hand, living longer doesn't mean having good health and wellbeing. The elders have suffered endless chronic pains which result from medicines forcing their body to endure the deterioration of aging. This obviously hurts the society to a certain extent.
In my perspective, if health care services only pay attention to the life expectancy of individuals and go against sickness, instead of helping people to achieve optimal health, human beings may continue to witness more mental and physical suffering.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 228, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
... year. On the other hand, living longer doesnt mean having good health and wellbeing. ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, if, may, nevertheless, so, therefore, well, while, as to, for example, for instance, such as, as well as, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1363.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 250.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.452 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97635364384 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75368848511 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.696 0.561755894193 124% => OK
syllable_count: 426.6 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.4072219924 49.4020404114 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.846153846 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2307692308 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.0 7.06120827912 170% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.145596623914 0.244688304435 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0475592512289 0.084324248473 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0300232152171 0.0667982634062 45% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0829747045624 0.151304729494 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0195115168357 0.056905535591 34% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.33 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.01 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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