You recently received a letter from a friend asking for advice about whether to go to college or to try to get a job. You think he/she should get a job.
Write a letter to this friend.
In your letter:
say why he/she would not enjoy going to college
explain why getting a job is a good idea for him/her
suggest types of job that would be suitable for him/he
Dear Sneha,
I received your letter yesterday and my heartiest congratulations to you on passing your graduation with distinction. I thought a lot about you wanting my advice on whether you should join a job or go to college and I feel you should try to get a job.
Let me first tell you why I feel you wouldn't enjoy going to college. I have observed that the curriculum of post graduation is better understood if we have some relevant experience in the same field. Also, your most peers in the college would already be having a experience of minimum three years and it would be very difficult for you to adjust to the environment and cope up with the pressure of tough subjects without any experience.
Furthermore, I feel if you get a job before going to college you would also be help to secure yourself financially. The job experience will not only help you financially but also provide you hands on experience on the specialized subjects of your post graduation curriculum. I have noticed that like most people, you understand the subject better when you have some experiment or experience with it. Another advantage of getting a job before going proceeding for higher education is that some colleges give extra credit score to the experience. Therefore, having a job first would definitely help you.
I would suggest you to look for job applications in start up companies for the role relevant to your post graduation subject. Working in start ups would provide you with the right kind of exposure to the domain and also help you gain experience. Please feel free to reach out to me incase you need any further assistance. I am looking forward to know your decision.
Yours faithfully,
Molly
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 38, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: wouldn't
.... Let me first tell you why I feel you wouldnt enjoy going to college. I have observed...
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Line 3, column 261, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
... in the college would already be having a experience of minimum three years and i...
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Line 4, column 555, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...edit score to the experience. Therefore, having a job first would definitely help...
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Line 5, column 344, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[7]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'to knowing'.
Suggestion: to knowing
...urther assistance. I am looking forward to know your decision. Yours faithfully, Moll...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, look, so, therefore, i feel, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 4.92783505155 203% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 45.0 32.9175257732 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 26.3917525773 155% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 3.85567010309 441% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1410.0 937.175257732 150% => OK
No of words: 295.0 206.0 143% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.77966101695 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14434120667 3.78020617076 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79400186533 2.54303337028 110% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 127.690721649 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.522033898305 0.622605031667 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 441.0 290.88556701 152% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.8664482302 44.8134815571 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.0 76.5299724578 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6666666667 16.8248392259 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.73333333333 4.34317383033 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.323287923221 0.216113520407 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.121683845574 0.0766984524023 159% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0918594264732 0.0603063233224 152% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.225702651106 0.12726935374 177% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.098716248626 0.0580467560999 170% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 8.37731958763 130% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 70.7449484536 86% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.44 8.71597938144 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.63 7.59969072165 100% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 41.2886597938 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.