Many children are encouraged by their parents to get a part time job in their free time. What are the advantages and disadvantages to children of doing so?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Although many people believe that it is useful experience for children to do paid work, others consider that it can be determental. Children can learn about earning money earlier and gain independence from doing paid work, however, there are also drawbacks to be taken into account.
First of all, in terms of gaining experience, children who have paid work are more advanced than the others. Let’s take grass-cutting job as an example. Children who do this work will have chances to communicate with likelihood to offer them a service. Therefore they are more confident and experienced than the others who just stay at home and keep doing homeworks and don not know about the oustside world. Secondly, defenders of child labour argue that it is an effective method of learning. Children may be able to apply knowledge taught to them in a real life working climate. For instance, if a boy likes to play cricket and he is working at a sports shop. In such case, he can learn a lot about cricket from customers and other people.
On the other hand, , children may neglect the classroom study and even fail the class. The worst thing is yet to come. They may become so preoccupied with the benefits ahead of them such as small salary that they may leave school. Second, as children can make money at an early age, they would feel that it is appropriate to spend it on luxury things. This will watse the money that childre have earned and they will be controlled by money.
In conclusion, children can have lots of benefits from do part time job, however, there are several pitfall to be given consideration.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, for instance, in conclusion, such as, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1328.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 281.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.72597864769 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09427095027 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51134942047 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.583629893238 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 404.1 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.218735301 49.4020404114 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.0 106.682146367 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5625 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.3125 7.06120827912 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.149119513633 0.244688304435 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0499826759461 0.084324248473 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0493256798585 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112109057641 0.151304729494 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0519362878114 0.056905535591 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 13.0946893788 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 50.2224549098 142% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 11.3001002004 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.86 12.4159519038 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.57 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 78.4519038076 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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