Some think scientists should be allowed to send messages into space to communicate with other life forms while others believe this is too dangerous.
Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.
Some people said that cosmos researchers should be permitted to spread message into galaxy to contact with other life outer space, but opponents argue that is too hazardous. I will illustrate my own opinion to you in this essay.
There is a variety of benefits of communicate with outer life forms. Mostly, if we do it successful, and have responds them. This evidence could answer the biggest query that some people still confuse about. There is life outer our planet. Second reason, we could learn a bunch of things about them such as the way they build an enormous tower that accurately in centimeters, their body structures, their massive technology; simultaneously, we could also make a research about their planet, which have a lot of mineral that we have not found. After scientists finish their studies, they could apply all those stuffs into the improvement of society and human on earth. Thirdly, communicating with extraterrestrial it lead to the development and formation of lots of subjects such as astrophysics, cosmology, astronomy, and those subjects are exceedingly crucial in protecting and developing every animal on earth include human nowadays.
Nevertheless, conversing with extraterrestrial maybe is a risky step because we just only know a few information and evidences about them. We would never know what they think; would they invade our planet when they catch our signal or come to Earth like a collaborator. Those are still mysterious questions.
In conclusion, contact with creature from outer space could bring a dozens of advantages, but it could be perilous if we do not prepare carefully for their coming.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 462, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[1]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'research'.
Suggestion: research
...ogy; simultaneously, we could also make a research about their planet, which have a lot of...
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Line 3, column 718, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'leads'?
Suggestion: leads
... communicating with extraterrestrial it lead to the development and formation of lot...
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Line 5, column 98, Rule ID: MANY_FEW_UNCOUNTABLE[2]
Message: Use 'much' or 'little' with uncountable nouns.
Suggestion: much; little
... risky step because we just only know a few information and evidences about them. W...
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Line 5, column 98, Rule ID: MANY_NN_U[6]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun information seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'little information'.
Suggestion: little information
... risky step because we just only know a few information and evidences about them. We would neve...
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Line 5, column 309, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
.... Those are still mysterious questions. In conclusion, contact with creature fro...
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Line 7, column 67, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a dozen' or simply 'dozens'?
Suggestion: a dozen; dozens
...h creature from outer space could bring a dozens of advantages, but it could be perilous...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, nevertheless, second, so, still, third, thirdly, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 24.0651302605 162% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1385.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 266.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.20676691729 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03850299372 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94094791322 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.635338345865 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 425.7 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 81.8323441213 49.4020404114 166% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.538461538 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4615384615 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 7.06120827912 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.159984754821 0.244688304435 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0618762844496 0.084324248473 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0726173069886 0.0667982634062 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117685502243 0.151304729494 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.112705178025 0.056905535591 198% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.08 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.