You have recently bought a Wi-Fi router from an online shop. The web page said that the router would be setup to connect to the internet automatically, but so far you have not been able to get a connection.
Write an e-mail to the online shop. In your e-mail:
say who you are
explain the problem
say what action you would like the shop to take
Dear Sir and Madam,
I am writing to ask about the problem with the Wi-Fi router. One week ago, I purchased a Wi-Fi router from your online shop, yet the products suddenly stopped working. I really need to use the internet now to study online courses for my college. I am hoping it will use as soon as possible.
The TP-Link AC1211 Dual Band Wireless Wi-Fi Router that I purchased from your shop. I cannot find out the reason why it is not to function, but I tried other similar routers that I borrowed from my friends and it worked.
I am a full-time international student now. Due to COVID-19, I have to study online courses at home on weekdays, so that I need a good internet connection and a higher quality of wireless to study. As you can see, I am totally dependent on this equipment to get connected to the internet, so I need to get a new router or fixed this router immediately. I am hoping you send me a new one or repair this one within the next three days. Thank you for your time and I hope to hear your reply soon.
Yours faithfully,
Emma Williams
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 20, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sir and Madam, I am writing to ask about the problem wi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, really, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 1.0 7.48453608247 13% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 32.9175257732 106% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 875.0 937.175257732 93% => OK
No of words: 201.0 206.0 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.35323383085 4.54256449028 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76529505866 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47074915183 2.54303337028 97% => OK
Unique words: 118.0 127.690721649 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.587064676617 0.622605031667 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 273.6 290.88556701 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.1963064915 44.8134815571 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 72.9166666667 76.5299724578 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.75 16.8248392259 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.25 4.34317383033 29% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.30394175338 0.216113520407 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0968965319713 0.0766984524023 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0735554343713 0.0603063233224 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.146916324654 0.12726935374 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0875554745397 0.0580467560999 151% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.4 8.37731958763 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.65 8.71597938144 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.97 7.59969072165 105% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 41.2886597938 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.