Age discrimination
Age discrimination occurs when a person is treated unfairly or not given the same opportunity in a similar situation, because of their age. Nowadays age discrimination is a highly up for debate in the modern workplace, age discrimination begins when an elderly or senior staff member is not given employment opportunities, promotions or unfairly dismissed, simply because they are old in some people’s eyes.
In this essay, I would like to discuss that age discrimination against elderly or senior workers should be halted or stopped completely. Many experts say that age discrimination, is equal to many other forms of discrimination, and must me halted or made illegal. Elderly or senior people have vast amounts of knowledge and experience in their line of work or profession, they can even help train and mentor the younger members who join their field. For and instance a 60-year old doctor can treat patients better than a doctor who is at the beginning of his medical career some people believe that age discrimination should not be illegal. Due to advancements in technologies, many elderly or senior people find it difficult and is not familiar with them for an instance if any new accounting software’s such as MYOB is introduced many of the them will either take time to learn them or say it is difficult to figure out being they are used to many of the old software’s as they have stated their career 40 years ago comparing to their younger’ counterparts. If a company employees’ a person who is 58 years old, he would most likely retire in 2 years.
However, in my opinion, age discrimination should be made illegal, as most companies can benefit from experience workforce. In conclusion, age discrimination should be made illegal in our society.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 839, Rule ID: DT_PRP[1]
Message: Possible typo. Did you mean 'the' or 'them'?
Suggestion: the; them
...re’s such as MYOB is introduced many of the them will either take time to learn them or ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, so, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 10.5418719212 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 6.10837438424 180% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 8.36945812808 179% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 5.94088669951 135% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 20.9802955665 114% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 31.9359605911 97% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 5.75862068966 260% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1479.0 1207.87684729 122% => OK
No of words: 295.0 242.827586207 121% => OK
Chars per words: 5.01355932203 5.00649968141 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14434120667 3.92707691288 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.13319376814 2.71678728327 115% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 139.433497537 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.545762711864 0.580463131201 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 468.9 379.143842365 124% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.71428571429 175% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6551724138 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.5024630542 141% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 98.0742575807 50.4703680194 194% => OK
Chars per sentence: 147.9 104.977214359 141% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.5 20.9669160288 141% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.4 7.25397266985 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.12807881773 73% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 6.9802955665 57% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 2.75862068966 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.363351917066 0.242375264174 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.192146249083 0.0925447433944 208% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.150309799872 0.071462118173 210% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.323828491147 0.151781067708 213% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.125928396588 0.0609392437508 207% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.9 12.6369458128 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.04 53.1260098522 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 10.9458128079 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.37 11.5310837438 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.5 8.32886699507 102% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 55.0591133005 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.94827586207 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.3980295567 131% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.5123152709 143% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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