Artists need a certain amount of freedom to develop their creativity. Some people think that artists should have total freedom to express any thoughts and idea. To what extent do you agree or disagree.
Designers require total independence and liberty to build their imaginations. Some school of thought believe that they should be given such privileges to show their innovations and thoughts. This essay completely agrees that such independence should be given to artists because it enhances their job satisfaction and makes work faster by saving valuable time.
As an innovator, being able to freely express and showcase your ideas and innovation brings about job satisfaction. This simply means you are elated with the fact that you can freely visualize ur thought on a paper and this gives an individual a sense of fulfillment.
Having the liberty to demonstrate an imagination freely makes work faster and less boring. What this implies is that you do not need to spend so much valuable time in thinking or trying to visualize an idea you are not sure of. This makes working faster for the individual, reducing stress and brain fatigue.For example, artists in Nigeria can draw about 20 images a day due to freedom to express ideas and thoughts.
In conclusion, giving artists total independence to convey and reveal their innovations is a welcome development as it helps enhance job satisfaction as well as getting their work done in the quickest of time with less stress.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
so, well, for example, in conclusion, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 41.998997996 57% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1074.0 1615.20841683 66% => OK
No of words: 210.0 315.596192385 67% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.11428571429 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80675409584 4.20363070211 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80756994207 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 176.041082164 70% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.590476190476 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 328.5 506.74238477 65% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.363007717 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.333333333 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.3333333333 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.33333333333 7.06120827912 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.248058828775 0.244688304435 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.093982332862 0.084324248473 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0410444202689 0.0667982634062 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.136361524058 0.151304729494 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0419193655003 0.056905535591 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.39 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 78.4519038076 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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