In today's world of advanced science and technology, we still greatly value our artists such as musicians, painters and writers. What can arts tell us about life that science and technology cannot?
At present, when science and technology have rapidly progressed, such parts of our life as the art which presents musicians, painters, and writers are still appreciated by us. It should be mentioned that art is human creativity directed towards making meaning of life through beauty and goodness and exchanging human history through generations whereas technology only produces the tools for usefulness in our field of life.
It is true that the essential definitions related to spiritual aspects of life are determined by the different types of art’s language. Besides, there are paintings, songs, books and sculpture are directed to express the author point of view in order to perceive the other attitude the life situations and to consider to fulfill a primarily independent aesthetic function. As a result, people have formed various feelings such as beauty, aesthetics, throughout not only their own experience but also embrace from the artworks. As such sculptures presented in the Hermitage museum, for example, make feelings to be surrounding beautiful things because their shapes have been performed aesthetically beautiful.
Science apart, artworks from the different periods of human history have explained the crucial moment of humanity. The authors who experienced historical moments attempted to capture in their works. For example, War and World written by L. Tolstoy is still a historical chronicle having the real description of World War I and the lifestyle of that time along with fictional characters therefore people in twenty-first century are able to read and comprehend that epoch.
In conclusion, art is a significant part of our life which is aimed to form the essential things and to transfer the historical moments to descendants thus people are still estimated painters, musicians, and writers, meanwhile, science and technology are only about inventions for an easier life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 310, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[3]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'consider fulfilling'.
Suggestion: consider fulfilling
...her attitude the life situations and to consider to fulfill a primarily independent aesthetic funct...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, if, so, still, therefore, thus, whereas, while, for example, in conclusion, such as, as a result, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1617.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 295.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.4813559322 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14434120667 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90827702699 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.586440677966 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 493.2 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 73.2349327295 49.4020404114 148% => OK
Chars per sentence: 147.0 106.682146367 138% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.8181818182 20.7667163134 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.2727272727 7.06120827912 174% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.220488618181 0.244688304435 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0767386637628 0.084324248473 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0822566696011 0.0667982634062 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.141298459807 0.151304729494 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0843068406967 0.056905535591 148% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.8 13.0946893788 136% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.63 50.2224549098 73% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.8 12.4159519038 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.85 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.