4/1/2020: Today, TV channels provide man’s sport shows more than women’s sport shows, why? Should TV channels give equal time to women’s sport and men’s sport?
Though society is now called democratic, chauvinism still exists, and that explains why television is fraught with male sports programs. Some emphasize the economic value, arguing that female sports programs are less attractive and generate less revenue. Because men are masculine, muscular and charismatic, they definitely attract more viewers, including women themselves, and any male sport show is bound to impress a mass audience.
Meanwhile, women, because of their responsibilities as housewives and social workers, hardly manage to watch sports, let alone participate in them. Critics go so far as to say that women’s engagement in sports and equitable appearance in the media are unnecessary and distract them from fulfilling the roles of true mothers and social workers. Not only will governments have to invest a huge amount of money in the creation of suitable female sport programs on television, but a number of women are also likely to start being addicted to gambling owing to being fans of their own shows.
It is, however, high time that the entire world acknowledges the importance of women in sports. Notwithstanding that many people claim that egalitarianism prevails in society, women are still looked down on by men when joining predominantly male sports like football, basketball, etc. Governments, for that reason, should launch media campaigns awakening society to the reality of female participation in sports with outstandingly strong and beautiful ladies actually appealing to millions of viewers worldwide. Undeniably, women who are as intelligent, energetic and physically agile as men can even come up with creative ideas to revolutionize sports. The world of sports on television may become far more interesting than it is now once women equal men in the amount of airtime.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, however, if, look, may, so, still, while, as to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1534.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 282.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.43971631206 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09790868904 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01174703289 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.641843971631 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 478.8 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 44.468207605 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 139.454545455 106.682146367 131% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.6363636364 20.7667163134 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.18181818182 7.06120827912 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.325356292735 0.244688304435 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.115859602074 0.084324248473 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0595582767706 0.0667982634062 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.209830619057 0.151304729494 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0511939008006 0.056905535591 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.0 13.0946893788 130% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 50.2224549098 75% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.57 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.8 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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