You would like to participate in a work-related seminar in another country.
Write a letter to the person in charge of the seminar and ask for detailed information regarding the
• Dates
• Program
• accommodation and cost
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am Dr. Mariyam Basathiya, working as an Ayurveda practitioner in India. I recently came across an advertisement in The Health magazine about your upcoming Yoga seminar in Singapore. I am very much interested and I would like to inquire a few details.
Could you please let me know the exact start and end dates of your seminar? Actually, the article I read in the magazine only mentioned that it will be held in Singapore in December. I need to know the dates in order to plan my leaves from work.
May I know if the learning level of your workshop is basic or advanced? I had already attended a beginner level seminar last year, so I am hoping for an advanced course this time. And can you please also tell me about the class strength?
Will you provide the accommodation or the individual has to take care of it? Would it be possible for you to provide me with an estimated cost including the course fees, accommodation and food? I need to see if it matches with my budget.
I am looking forward to have your reply soon. Having abovementioned information will help me to plan my trip in advance.
Yours faithfully,
Mariyam Basathiya
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 22, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[7]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'to having'.
Suggestion: to having
...s with my budget. I am looking forward to have your reply soon. Having abovementioned ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, if, look, may, so, as to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 4.92783505155 203% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 32.9175257732 100% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 966.0 937.175257732 103% => OK
No of words: 209.0 206.0 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.62200956938 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80221413058 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74274967194 2.54303337028 108% => OK
Unique words: 128.0 127.690721649 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.612440191388 0.622605031667 98% => OK
syllable_count: 306.0 290.88556701 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 24.6843180087 44.8134815571 55% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 64.4 76.5299724578 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.9333333333 16.8248392259 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.66666666667 4.34317383033 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.168724089919 0.216113520407 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0497482412753 0.0766984524023 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0465689400898 0.0603063233224 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0875272225225 0.12726935374 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0378817908861 0.0580467560999 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.3 8.37731958763 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.74 70.7449484536 94% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.92 8.71597938144 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.76 7.59969072165 102% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 41.2886597938 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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