"The best way for a society to prepare its young people for leadership in government, industry, or other fields is by instilling in them a sense of cooperation, not competition."
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Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim. In developing and supporting your position, be sure to address the most compelling reasons and/or examples that could be used to challenge your position.
Competition has become an essential part of our society nowadays, everyone is trying to compete in various fields to be the best one standing with eminent skills. But, at the same time, this kind of competition leads to damage to mental health which can lead to consequences as well as limits one from achieving his goal. Though to some extent I agree with this point considering other factors.
Firstly, when young people try to compete with others they tend to lose the value of leadership as they try to acquire a smug nature which makes them selfish and also makes them adamant. Because of the same reason, they won't listen to anyone in the group and will lead to conflicts. For instance, if leaders of different countries were taught the value of cooperation in leadership then they won't have disputes instead there would have been a peaceful agreement.
Secondly, competition leads to damages be it related to mental health or the economy. Since, when countries try to compete with each other they don't take account of the consequences they would face because of that instead they try to achieve it at any cost which can lead to great damage to the economy and the resources. As well as when people try to compete with each other and fail to achieve the goal that others did they try to take wrong and imprudent decisions like drugs, suicide, etc. which lead to mental or physical health damage. But, if cooperation was taken into account it could have worked as a panacea to these situations and would have helped them to become a better leader or person at last.
Although, cooperation can also stem people from proceeding in the right and assertive direction since competitions can help them to develop at full capacity and gain new values which would help him to become a better leader since one would be able to imbibe a lot of insights that they have lacked in and can bring better results in the command. It can be viewed from the past that due to the competition each country was able to grow at a faster pace since the leaders didn't only believe in the cooperation part which would have lead to futile results.
All in all, there should be a proper balance between both the factors since having one quality in greater amounts can be devastating and can lead to bad and futile outcomes. Also, to be considered we can focus a bit more on the cooperation part since the issues nowadays are becoming more complex and difficult to solve as they can lead to damage and conflicts.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 323, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Though” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... as limits one from achieving his goal. Though to some extent I agree with this point ...
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Line 5, column 10, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... been a peaceful agreement. Secondly, competition leads to damages be it relat...
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Line 5, column 146, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...ies try to compete with each other they dont take account of the consequences they w...
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Line 7, column 471, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: didn't
...grow at a faster pace since the leaders didnt only believe in the cooperation part wh...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, then, well, for instance, kind of, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 19.6327345309 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 19.0 12.9520958084 147% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 11.1786427146 143% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 13.6137724551 95% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 28.8173652695 104% => OK
Preposition: 75.0 55.5748502994 135% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 16.3942115768 79% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2060.0 2260.96107784 91% => OK
No of words: 441.0 441.139720559 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.67120181406 5.12650576532 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.58257569496 4.56307096286 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.41228066559 2.78398813304 87% => OK
Unique words: 212.0 204.123752495 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.480725623583 0.468620217663 103% => OK
syllable_count: 642.6 705.55239521 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59920159681 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.96107784431 60% => OK
Article: 0.0 8.76447105788 0% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 2.70958083832 258% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.67365269461 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.22255489022 71% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 19.7664670659 76% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 22.8473053892 127% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 70.2685009248 57.8364921388 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 137.333333333 119.503703932 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.4 23.324526521 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.53333333333 5.70786347227 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 5.15768463074 97% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.25449101796 76% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.20758483034 73% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 6.88822355289 131% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.67664670659 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.13805897357 0.218282227539 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0548232988367 0.0743258471296 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0344800521288 0.0701772020484 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0852077872463 0.128457276422 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0420768639561 0.0628817314937 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 14.3799401198 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.5 48.3550499002 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.1628742515 123% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 12.197005988 110% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.4 12.5979740519 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.87 8.32208582834 95% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 98.500998004 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 12.3882235529 109% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 11.1389221557 122% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.9071856287 118% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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