Some people think that mobile phones are harmful for children, while other disagree.
Some experts often argue that mobile phones are a nemesis for children, while others argue that it is a boom as they can do virtual education and their parents can track the geographic location anywhere around the world. In my opinion, as long as the youth is supervised on time spent and content consumed by their parents and school teachers, it could lessen the dangerous effects of cellphones.
On the one hand, excessive use of cellular phones may affect their health. For instance, the USA conducted a study on how health is influenced by the usage of gadgets, and almost 80% of school-going kids' results were negatively correlated with the screen time on phones. In addition to that, many kids spend time playing games online and do not prefer physical activities or any kind of sports such as swimming, cricket, football and etc, each of which has negative consequences on eyes and fitness. Secondly, they are exposed to undesirable content available on social media which could affect their mental sanity. Lastly, they become so obsessed with the internet that they sometimes disregard their studies, which has a long term effect on their lives.
First and foremost, their parents can track their location with means of different applications available online and can call them at any given time. So, they need not worry much and can trace them easily. Lastly, there is a ton of educational content available on various different websites, they can study at their own speed and can do it at any time.
To conclude, considering the aforementioned points, children are only at risk when they are using cell phones without strict rules formed by their parents at home, and teachers at schools.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 355, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, lastly, may, second, secondly, so, while, for instance, in addition, kind of, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1425.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 285.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10876417139 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55419316797 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.589473684211 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 432.9 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 53.192306658 49.4020404114 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.545454545 106.682146367 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.9090909091 20.7667163134 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0909090909 7.06120827912 143% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0888576976827 0.244688304435 36% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0353476731313 0.084324248473 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0699822355341 0.0667982634062 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.067775283631 0.151304729494 45% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0699310407832 0.056905535591 123% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 50.2224549098 109% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.02 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.87 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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