Successful sports professionals can earn a great deal more money than people in other important professions. Some people think this is fully justified while others think it is unfair.
Discuss both of these views and give your own opinion.
There is no hesitation in saying that celebrities like sports stars are paid a considerably high amount of money than those who are in important professions like teachers, doctors and engineers. Some believe that this is the right approach, whereas others consider this to be unjustifiable. In my opinion, there should not be a significant difference between the earnings of sportspeople and other professionals.
Those who support the high earnings of sports professionals claim that sports stars should earn high salaries due to two main reasons. Firstly, even the most talented sports professionals must undergo many years of training to develop the skills and fitness required, and this takes great commitment, dedication and passion. Secondly, talented sportspeople can even enhance the reputation of their country by winning international championships. However, there is no justification for giving them astronomical salaries, especially since their contributions to improving people's lives are negligible.
On the other hand, life would be difficult without doctors, engineers, teachers and other vital professionals. We can survive without sportspersons, but we might suffer or die with illness when doctors are not available. Teachers educate and inspire young people to be responsible citizens: their efforts produce the citizens of tomorrow. Similarly, there will be no civilization or useful technology without scientists and engineers. These professionals should earn high salaries because of their valuable services. Whereas, sports person are keen on showing their skills and provide entertainment to the public. Thus, it is felt that health, education and development in the country is the basic need for people and those professionals who provide these facilities should support with higher wages than sports salaries.
In conclusion, paying enormous salaries to sportspeople is unnecessary. We need to reconsider our social priorities and eliminate the great disparity in income received by diverse professionals. By doing so, we can build societies in which each one feels valued, appreciated and appropriately compensated for their own vocation or specialization.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, similarly, so, thus, whereas, in conclusion, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1878.0 1615.20841683 116% => OK
No of words: 322.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.83229813665 5.12529762239 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23607819155 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.2379257897 2.80592935109 115% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.593167701863 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 558.0 506.74238477 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.4370243943 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.470588235 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9411764706 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.58823529412 7.06120827912 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.22030151658 0.244688304435 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0618604858921 0.084324248473 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.040851682149 0.0667982634062 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.126196147833 0.151304729494 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0545297556671 0.056905535591 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.53 12.4159519038 133% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.38 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 78.4519038076 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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