New household appliances have resulted in more free time for women and have enabled them to both work and run a home with dependent children. What are the advantages for a family when the mother works? Do you think the disadvantages outweigh the advantages?
It is undeniable that with the advent of technology, women’s liberation from the daily strenuous tasks of the household has apparently come into existence since the beginning of the twentieth century. Consequently, females have been privileged with more leisure time for family and propelled to the workforce more than ever. Although some people assert that accelerating involvement of male counterparts into jobs owing to electrical aid has myriad drawbacks along with immense benefits. However, the question of whether the demerits of this outweigh the merits is definitely difficult to answer.
To begin with, there are numerous merits of working women to not only the family but all units of our complex social structure. one the most significant reason is the monetary provision, the working wives will ensure the financial security of their family as they will provide additional income which enhance the living standards. Secondly, this stream will contribute to shrinking the gender gap, as in previous times women had been doing all the household chores whereas men were the only bread earner of their houses, hence, tended to hold high status, but technology improves the situation along with the liberty to choose a career instead of humdrum routines. Thirdly, the sense of self-esteem due to economic freedom is also an advantage of machines that allow to pursue a profession along with looking after the family.
On the contrary, the negatives of this phenomenon cannot be denied as it will take a toll on the health and time of ambitious working women. Doing two crucial tasks at a time will push them towards a struggling life and results in a number of sacrifices in terms of health, hobbies, and most importantly quality time with family and friends. The second challenge is related to the children’s rearing which will be adversely affected as mothers will spend less time with them, this inadequate attention consequently results in persistently increasing obesity or malnutrition, indulgence into bad company and habits, physical and mental development, and last but not the least in certain cases, isolation from society give birth to the grave problems like social phobia. Lastly, the over-dependence on the electricity will reduce the physical efforts that increase the health risks. Moreover, it will have a detrimental effect on the environment too due to air pollution and garbage led but the usage of machines.
To conclude, it is hard to find out a concrete decision, as it can be vividly seen that this pattern of life has both some negative consequences with constructive benefits. Although Juggling between home and career is not a piece of cake, but little extra attention can make things fall into the right place.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 326, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Although” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...pelled to the workforce more than ever. Although some people assert that accelerating in...
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Message: Wordiness: Shorten this phrase to the shortest possible suggestion.
Suggestion: whether; the question whether
...s along with immense benefits. However, the question of whether the demerits of this outweigh the merit...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: One
... units of our complex social structure. one the most significant reason is the mone...
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Message: Did you mean 'pursuing'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'allow' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: pursuing
...lso an advantage of machines that allow to pursue a profession along with looking after t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, apparently, but, consequently, hence, however, if, lastly, look, moreover, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, whereas, on the contrary, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 66.0 41.998997996 157% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2313.0 1615.20841683 143% => OK
No of words: 444.0 315.596192385 141% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.20945945946 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.5903493882 4.20363070211 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78215333897 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 265.0 176.041082164 151% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.596846846847 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 729.0 506.74238477 144% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 85.2763872489 49.4020404114 173% => OK
Chars per sentence: 154.2 106.682146367 145% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.6 20.7667163134 143% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.5333333333 7.06120827912 149% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.229667800228 0.244688304435 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0673582803135 0.084324248473 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0492001072014 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116630470045 0.151304729494 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0451687229759 0.056905535591 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.9 13.0946893788 137% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.04 50.2224549098 84% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.53 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.91 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 136.0 78.4519038076 173% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.