The graph shows Japanese average monthly salary (Yen) from 1953 to 1983, and the prices of Black and white television and colour television during the same period.
The line graph illustrates the average number of wages every month of Japanese and the changes in the price of two types of different Televisions between 1953 and 1983.
Overall, It is noticeable that while the number of wages which Japanese were received every month increased, the figure for the price of Black and White Television and Color Television experienced the opposite trend.
In 1953, the price of Black and White Television was very high at 110.000 Yen while Japanese workers were only paid 18.000 Yen per month. At that time, Color Television was not available. Over the following 10 years, the price of Black and White Television decreased significantly by nearly two-third, with 40.000 Yen. By contrast, there was a slight increase in the average number of Japanese wages to over 20.000 Yen per month. Besides, there was the appearance of Color Television with the quite high price, 100.00 Yen.
By 1983, after many fluctuations, Japanese salary had increased dramatically nearly 70.000 Yen per month while the price of Color Television had decreased to approximately 48.000 Yen. A similar trend could be seen for Black and White Television, with the figure dropping to only 20.000 Yen.
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- The graph shows Japanese average monthly salary Yen from 1953 to 1983 and the prices of Black and white television and colour television during the same period 73
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, if, third, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 33.7804878049 89% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1011.0 965.302439024 105% => OK
No of words: 197.0 196.424390244 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.13197969543 4.92477711251 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74642080493 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64321305969 2.65546596893 100% => OK
Unique words: 99.0 106.607317073 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.502538071066 0.547539520022 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 308.7 283.868780488 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 3.36585365854 238% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.8771576247 43.030603864 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.333333333 112.824112599 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8888888889 22.9334400587 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.77777777778 5.23603664747 53% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.403230862691 0.215688989381 187% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.190776578727 0.103423049105 184% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0737462769459 0.0843802449381 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.273286436828 0.15604864568 175% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0357640370282 0.0819641961636 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.2329268293 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 61.2550243902 82% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.3012195122 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 11.4140731707 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.32 8.06136585366 91% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 40.7170731707 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.4329268293 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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