Some people say that advertising is extremely successful at persuading us to buy things. Other people think that advertising is so common that we no longer pay attention to it.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Advertisement is very oldest way to convey the product information to the people. With the time, the mode of advertisement has changed such as in past banners and radio were used but now internet is very successful way. Some people think advertisement is very successful nowadays to but things because of creativity and modern way while other believe that it is too common and only purpose to deceit people. I will give my opinion in conclusion.
On one hand, there are so many modes of advertising such as radio, television, internet, banners on road etc. All ways are proved successful. In past, people used to listen radio and they heard about product then bought them. Now, internet and television is most successful way to convey that the advertisement products are best and people believe in that. On more thing is creativity and graphics used in thus people can attract to that particular product. Advertising specially affect children because they are naïve to think further and children forced to their parents to buy things. For example, product like Kinder Joy has main focused on children and used cartoon to attract infants. Also, Kinder Joy put surprised gift for children. By this way, advertising is best way to persuading us. In contrast, sometime it gives important information such as due to flood, particular state needs fund to provide safety to people.
On the other hand, advertising is very common that sometime people feel bored. The one reason is that, it interrupts the show and other reason is tat advertisement always gives false information. Some think that it is always tried to deceit general public. If someone pay more attention then he or she may buy useless things. It is better to avoid advertisement.
I believe that, government should restrict some kind of advertisement that harm people. Apart from that, to avoid all kind of advertisement may result that sometime we can miss important information.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, so, then, thus, while, apart from, for example, in conclusion, in contrast, kind of, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1628.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 322.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.05590062112 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23607819155 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77963322503 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.527950310559 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 507.6 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.163417147 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.5238095238 106.682146367 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.3333333333 20.7667163134 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.2380952381 7.06120827912 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.29769322837 0.244688304435 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0832053144854 0.084324248473 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0634410852615 0.0667982634062 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.184132145558 0.151304729494 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0509597964945 0.056905535591 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 13.0946893788 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.48 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.27 8.58950901804 85% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.