You have been invited to give a talk at a local community college in America about your home country. Write a letter to the secretary of the college. In your letter
* accept the invitation and offer a possible date for the talk
* summarise what information you will include in the talk
* say what equipment you will need the college to arrange for you to give the talk
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to express my happiness about the invitation that is offered to me last week, and I would like to accept it.
It’s been such a great pleasure to me to hold such an offer from your college after so long. As I have been busy doing some voluntary work for people nearby our community college who have recently lost their jobs in this pandemic. So, I would be available next week, November 29.
I am thinking to include topics like agriculture and its effect on country economy because agriculture is one of the integral activities which is important in gaining significant GDP in my country. Mostly individuals are indulged in this practice to earn money, and I have one power point presentation with a video that depicts how they achieve it.
Although I will be carrying my laptop with me, I would need a USB connector to attach it with the projector. If it is unavailable, I will try to upload it or handover those to your IT department beforehand. Please let me know about its feasibility.
Thank you for considering me to speak at your esteem college.
Yours faithfully,
Apoorva Chikara
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Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 13, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ng me to speak at your esteem college. Yours faithfully, Apoorva Chikara
^^^^^
Line 14, column 18, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... esteem college. Yours faithfully, Apoorva Chikara
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 32.9175257732 118% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 946.0 937.175257732 101% => OK
No of words: 199.0 206.0 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.75376884422 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75589349951 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72823136531 2.54303337028 107% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 127.690721649 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.683417085427 0.622605031667 110% => OK
syllable_count: 297.9 290.88556701 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.6862885787 44.8134815571 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.0 76.5299724578 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0909090909 16.8248392259 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.545454545455 4.34317383033 13% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.195507403512 0.216113520407 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0679765475284 0.0766984524023 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0579295697647 0.0603063233224 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105457165165 0.12726935374 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.062079401286 0.0580467560999 107% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 8.37731958763 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 70.7449484536 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.97 8.71597938144 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.26 7.59969072165 109% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 41.2886597938 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 8.62886597938 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 13, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ng me to speak at your esteem college. Yours faithfully, Apoorva Chikara
^^^^^
Line 14, column 18, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... esteem college. Yours faithfully, Apoorva Chikara
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 32.9175257732 118% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 946.0 937.175257732 101% => OK
No of words: 199.0 206.0 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.75376884422 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75589349951 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72823136531 2.54303337028 107% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 127.690721649 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.683417085427 0.622605031667 110% => OK
syllable_count: 297.9 290.88556701 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.6862885787 44.8134815571 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.0 76.5299724578 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0909090909 16.8248392259 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.545454545455 4.34317383033 13% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.195507403512 0.216113520407 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0679765475284 0.0766984524023 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0579295697647 0.0603063233224 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105457165165 0.12726935374 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.062079401286 0.0580467560999 107% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 8.37731958763 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 70.7449484536 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.97 8.71597938144 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.26 7.59969072165 109% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 41.2886597938 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 8.62886597938 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.