Buying things on the Internet, such as books, air tickets and groceries, is becoming more and more popular.
Do the advantages of shopping in this way outweigh the disadvantages?
In present day, there has been a growing trend in online shopping. This situation not only offers numerous opportunities but also may lead to some dangers and disadvantages for people when buying things. In my opinion, its benefits are much more significant than the drawbacks.
On the one hand, it is undeniable that online shopping contains some negative aspects. Firstly, customers are not allowed to examine the quality of their products instantly before buying them. Consequently, they would purchase the item with poor quality and this eventually becomes a waste of money. Moreover, this disadvantage often leads to customer dissatisfaction. Secondly, identity theft and digital scams are particularly common on the Internet. In addition, there is a large number of careless users who are more easy to be leaked their information online. As a result, hackers can use these (this) personal information to fake their identity so that they could do illegal things.
On the other hand, people are able to reap the benefits of online shopping. Firsly, online shopping enables consumers to get a service or a product from home. Apparently, they no longer need to travel a long distance or wait in a long queue to pay their bills. Hence, this would save valuable time for customers. Secondly, online shopping make it possible for customers to browse for products and checking the prices between these online shops. That is to say, people can make a better decision to buy what they like after taking prices, sizes and models of the products into consideration. For example, consumers enjoy great freedom to bye (buy) online products from reputable websites such as Tiki, Amazon, Shopee and compare the quality and price of the product before making a purchasing decision. Therefore, it is also more economical for customers to go buy things on the Internet than the traditional way of shopping.
In conclusion, despite some dangers and drawbacks from online shopping, I believe that the advantages still occupy much more than the disadvantages.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 477, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
... on the Internet. In addition, there is a large number of careless users who are more easy to be ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, apparently, but, consequently, first, firstly, hence, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, still, therefore, for example, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as a result, in my opinion, on the other hand, that is to say
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1718.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 331.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.19033232628 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26537283232 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78490861499 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.586102719033 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 548.1 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.5078825018 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.4210526316 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4210526316 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.1052631579 7.06120827912 171% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.191498510238 0.244688304435 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0548122256053 0.084324248473 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0475743421579 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11431476034 0.151304729494 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.020375470058 0.056905535591 36% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.53 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.39 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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