Nowadays in many countries people are following the latest fashion, hairstyle and so on. Why are they so influenced by fashion? Is it a positive or negative development?
Needless to say, latest fashion trends is in vogue in this modern epoch in numerous countries. I deemed that this influence is because of the media as they are promoting new trends which I assert is a negative development as it is a wastage of time,money and energy of people.
To embark on the main reason, people are influenced by the media as they are new trends are promoted by telecasting the attractive endorsements frequently. In this competitive era, every company wants to earn profit and for that they are offering heavy discounts on the items as well as signing celebrities to attract numerous buyers as they want to follow them. This can be illustrated from the fact that when Aishwarya Rai Bachan was signed as a brand ambassador of loreal, the sales surges from 60 to 100 percent owing to the fan following. Thus, media is the root from where fashion is reached to every home in different nations.
Following a latest fashion means wasting time, money as well as energy because fashion changes frequently. The items purchased are wasted as the fashion becomes outdated and this is an infinite process in which people become spendthrifts which may put them in debts. Moreover, Whilst doing Shopping is a time consuming process which ultimately drains an individual energy. For instance, people are buying branded clothes that sometimes are pinch to their pocket but still they want to purchase as it’s a matter of reputation. Thence, following fashion may lead to the wastage to three important pearls of one’s life.
To reiterate, it can be said that fashion has influenced people in a negative way by advertising on numerous broadcasting devices. In addition to it, people are wasting their precious time, energy and money.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, if, may, moreover, so, still, then, thus, well, for instance, in addition, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1455.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 293.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.96587030717 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13729897018 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69045474794 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.546075085324 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 451.8 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.7834518013 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.923076923 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5384615385 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.46153846154 7.06120827912 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.234794533403 0.244688304435 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0873082050734 0.084324248473 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0584763086851 0.0667982634062 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.149477913409 0.151304729494 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0276383887575 0.056905535591 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.72 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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