1. The number of people interested in cosmetic surgery is increasing in order to improve their physical appearance. Why do people do operations to change the way they look? Do you think it is a positive or negative development?
The desire to look better is everybody’s dream and people try everything to make it happen. In recent years esthetic procedures are becoming more and more popular among people who want to improve their personality. People usually opt for such practice to treat some underlying disease or just to improve the overall outlook. I will explain the facts that how these cosmetic treatments are a positive development.
Firstly, the most compelling factor I believe is treating specific health conditions. As there are some diseases like acne which, if get worse, is a spoiling factor for a women’s life. A study carried out by Daily News in Africa, which reveals that the divorce ratio was raised because of skin diseases in girls. Thus, A treatment that can make an individual look better is for sure a positive development.
The second reason people are attracted to esthetic operations is that they can shape their bodies in the way they want. A lot of obese people who cannot get rid of excessive fat from their bodies use such procedures to enhance their appearance. For instance, in the past 5 years, liposuction surgeries performed in Pakistan increased by 50% as compared to the last decade. Hence, the advancement made in the cosmetic industry helping people to achieve what they want.
To Sum up, I believe that the plastic surgeries and other esthetic procedures are overall a positive development not only because it is helping to cure many diseases but also because people can shape their body which seems very hard for them with a simple procedure.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, hence, if, look, second, so, thus, for instance, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1309.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 262.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.99618320611 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02323427807 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66182724492 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.599236641221 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 422.1 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.0546019821 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.692307692 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1538461538 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.53846153846 7.06120827912 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.204102801771 0.244688304435 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0700655362222 0.084324248473 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0504812945772 0.0667982634062 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120876816556 0.151304729494 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0678222230496 0.056905535591 119% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.72 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.06 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 78.4519038076 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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