One of the consequences of improved medical care is that people are living longer and life expectancy is increasing.
It is considered by some that developing medical aid help to living more and life apprehension is grow. Healthcare is one of the most need of citizens in the country. Every year governments provide with money medical new research and care. In my opinon, there are more advantages than drawbacks.
One evident benefit is having fewer numbers of death. With high quality medicine technology the scientists can made a vaccines for many illness and invite drugs which people will buy. Threfore, the government can get public money. By improving medical care, many seventies, eighteens and even older people can enjoy their long and free retirement life because they can travel and do everything that they want despite of their work and children. Moreover, they could see and take care about grandchildren and share expirience with young generation.
On the other hand, there are not enough resource to provide people with food or other necessary things. And also old people will not able to get a job if they have a little pension the goverment will have to provide this people and this mean that they need spend a huge amount of money. Secondly, there are also problems of employment opportunities because nowadays many old people working more than they should that is why every year millions of people can not find a job by their occupation.
To conclude, longer life expectancy outweigh the disadvantages. I think that every person want to live more in this precious life and enjoy every moment with close friends and family therefore our governments should spend more money to increase medical aid. But humans duty is care about enviroment and use economically nature resources.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 99, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'grown'.
Suggestion: grown
...to living more and life apprehension is grow. Healthcare is one of the most need of ...
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Line 2, column 117, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a vaccine' or simply 'vaccines'?
Suggestion: a vaccine; vaccines
...cine technology the scientists can made a vaccines for many illness and invite drugs which...
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Line 2, column 132, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun illness seems to be countable; consider using: 'many illnesses'.
Suggestion: many illnesses
... the scientists can made a vaccines for many illness and invite drugs which people will buy....
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Line 3, column 217, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...sion the goverment will have to provide this people and this mean that they need spe...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, i think, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1403.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 279.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.02867383513 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08696624509 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58752567427 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.584229390681 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 450.0 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.5621017298 49.4020404114 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.5333333333 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.6 7.06120827912 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.269859082976 0.244688304435 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0802108903719 0.084324248473 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0617311059326 0.0667982634062 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.159387815259 0.151304729494 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0529505443509 0.056905535591 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.89 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.98 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.