There is growing evidence that man- made activities are making global temprature higher.
What might be the man-made causes of tempratures rising? How should we deal with this problem?
It is a true that, global warming has increased over the year around the globe. Unfortunately, humans play a pivotal role to create global temprature. İn order to solve this issue, there are a few measures needed to be taken by government and the humans. In this essay I will analyse the causes and private solutions.
First of all, trees and forests have been burned to make lands for houses and commercial buildings. This cause is creating a prominent role to increase countrys' economical issues. To do this, government should encourage instruction companies to invest more apartments than houses. The reason behind this is that, apartments can assotciate a range of people and it takes up less lands. Finally, if government can control the limits of these buildings with liability, we might have to resemble our forests from being destroyed.
On the one hand, most factories and transport system are becoming a signaficant reason for cause of air pollution and the increase in temprature around the globe. To do this, we can encourage people to purchase electric cars over normal cars. To a certain extent, it can avoid to reduce air condition. Although, government have to create potential guidelines. A final point that, state government should develop solutions to protect the earth.
In additons, we can educate adelecents though organizing companign and going to school for talking about a main factors to development of the pollution.
In conclusions, I think burning of trees, forests pollution from manifactures' emissions, transport system important evidence in rising global tempratures. İn order to eliminate these problem, everyone tend to precieve our essencial climate changes.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 162, Rule ID: ECONOMICAL_ECONOMIC[1]
Message: Did you mean 'economic' (=connected with economy)?
Suggestion: economic
...g a prominent role to increase countrys economical issues. To do this, government should e...
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Line 3, column 374, Rule ID: FEWER_LESS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun lands is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
...ciate a range of people and it takes up less lands. Finally, if government can contr...
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Line 5, column 272, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'avoid reducing'.
Suggestion: avoid reducing
...ormal cars. To a certain extent, it can avoid to reduce air condition. Although, government hav...
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Line 5, column 303, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Although” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
..., it can avoid to reduce air condition. Although, government have to create potential gu...
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Line 9, column 178, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this problem' or 'these problems'?
Suggestion: this problem; these problems
...obal tempratures. İn order to eliminate these problem, everyone tend to precieve our essencia...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, if, so, i think, in conclusion, in fact, talking about, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1438.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 270.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.32592592593 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05360046442 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85631204852 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.618518518519 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 441.9 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.1291903402 49.4020404114 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.5882352941 106.682146367 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.8823529412 20.7667163134 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.94117647059 7.06120827912 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.161659042638 0.244688304435 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0446401426309 0.084324248473 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0267046343356 0.0667982634062 40% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0787173922238 0.151304729494 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0312802638754 0.056905535591 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.34 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.12 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.