Some say that sports play an important role in the development of society. Others think it is nothing more than a leisure activity. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
To some people sport is merely a form of recreation, yet others argue that it is of paramount importance to society development. This essay will provide an in-depth analysis of both views before coming a rational conclusion.
On the one hand, it is believed that playing sport is a great way to improve health and ease tensions. Numerous benefits can be derived by playing sport on a daily basis. In terms of physical strength, participating in physical activities allow people to grow muscles, boost endurance and even enhance metabolism. It is also scientifically proven that the interaction with the surroundings helps to improve immune system, leading to great fitness and power. Additionally, playing sports also has a positive influence on mental well-being, which is essential for life fulfilment. Specifically, if people spend time on sport participation, the quality of sleep is enhanced significantly and many happy chemicals are produced such as endorphins, dopamine, which are amazing stress relievers.
However, other people claim that sport goes well beyond the spectrum of recreation as it also delivers multiple life lessons. The first and foremost one is the lesson of unity. In particular, sport draws people closer together, blurring the differences in religions, nationalities and cultures as all of the members have to find ways to collaborate and place trust in themselves as well as others to produce a harmonious performance. Moreover, it teaches people how to accept their failures, then handle their disappointment. Since victory is not always easily achieved, and failure is an inevitable part of sport, if one fails to accept their weakness, they can not learn form their mistakes and move forward. Therefore, sport somehow shows how the real world works and can be seen as a microcosm of human society.
In conclusion, sport is more than a pastime entertainment, and is a contribution to the improvement of individuals and society.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 297, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
...eligions, nationalities and cultures as all of the members have to find ways to collaborat...
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Line 3, column 673, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to form'
Suggestion: to form
...cept their weakness, they can not learn form their mistakes and move forward. Theref...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, moreover, so, then, therefore, well, in conclusion, in particular, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1656.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 312.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.30769230769 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20279927342 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.09481310887 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 176.041082164 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.615384615385 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 513.0 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.6757411386 49.4020404114 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.4 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.8 7.06120827912 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.175275677057 0.244688304435 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0552702363179 0.084324248473 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0467073117588 0.0667982634062 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118995333116 0.151304729494 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0510560429214 0.056905535591 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.52 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.49 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 78.4519038076 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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