These days more and more people are going to countries for significant periods of time, either to fund a job or to study. There are clearly many benefits to doing this, but people who live abroad can also face some difficulties.
Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of living and working in a working country.
In this globalised world, nearly everyone has an intention to live abroad for extended period. Some want to go to a foreign country in the hope of finding a job while some leave their home to get a world class education oversees. Even though you could gain a lot of benefits by going abroad to work or study, you might also go through tough times.
To start with positive sides of moving to another country. If you are someone with a huge passion of exploribg the world, learning new cultures, picking up new languages living abroad can offer you that all you need. For example, imagine you are going to the UK to study for degree. You aro not only getting high quality of education, but you can also expand your network. After you have graduated from a UK's university you will have lots of chances which you take for granted. They include, being officially allowed to stay in the UK for a year to seek employment and utimately gain a good job prospect.
However, living abroad does have some downsides alongside with certain upsides. You are away from home, that means you could not get support of your family and friends. Lack of support and motivation might even make you be homesick. Another disadvantage of it can be known when you face culture shock. Clearly, you are living in a country which has a lot of cultural and traditional differences to your home country. It will become a big deal if there is a labguage barrier as well. These problems lead to consider moving back to your home being unable to enjoy your journey in a foreign country.
All in all, leaving home to seek employment or to study abroad has both advantages and disadvatages. But, I think it highly depends on a person planning to immigrate to another country. If he is flexible and independent none of the difficulties can prevent him from enjoying the new culture and better lifestyle.
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, well, while, for example, i think, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1543.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 332.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.64759036145 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.2685907696 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50474038889 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.563253012048 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 490.5 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.0494571146 49.4020404114 55% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 81.2105263158 106.682146367 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4736842105 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 7.06120827912 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 8.67935871743 173% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.149362383758 0.244688304435 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0506797370329 0.084324248473 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0433206857532 0.0667982634062 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104223806831 0.151304729494 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0527709557039 0.056905535591 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 13.0946893788 70% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.39 12.4159519038 76% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.86 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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