Many students choose to take a gap year before starting university, to travel or gain work experience.
Do you think this is a good idea or a waste of time?
Taking a gap year is a big decision forto many students. However, some people believe it is a waste of time. By contrast, a part of people think it is a good idea for students. IsDoes a gap year is unbenifical for students? In this essay, I will offer my opinion and given supporting examples and reasons why a gap year is a great idea in my point of view.
First of all, a gap year can provide chances to let students explore the world as well as deal with some new changes that people haven’t been experience before. Generally speaking, what they will do during their a gap year is that they will travel to many countries alone, and they won’t travel as usual with their family menbers. Therefore, it is a great stimulus to help a person grown up via independently figure out those problems that happen in life, for example, rend a flat, soicalize with other people, or make a schedule. Thus, it is clear to see that taking a gap year is beneficial for students especially on their personal growth, and help them increase their abilities of living alone.
Secondly, to take a gap year means that they are older than their classmates when they get back to their universities, with that being said the person who take a gap year tend to be more mature than others. That is benefit for the people to complete the chances and the opportunities in universities, while create your own networking. That is because they experience how the real society works during their gap year meanwhile, they know that the importance of resources or networks when they acquire some jobs during their gap year.
To sum up, taking a gap year is a good decision in my opinion. That is because it can gain a lot of experience that your contemporaries might not have during the gap year, while it helps you to become more independent than others. Furthermore, it can remind people to use the school sources to build your personal network.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, however, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, well, while, for example, as well as, first of all, in my opinion, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 45.0 24.0651302605 187% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1578.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 344.0 315.596192385 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.58720930233 5.12529762239 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30665032142 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57691314197 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.517441860465 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 487.8 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.3180599811 49.4020404114 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.2 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.9333333333 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.86666666667 7.06120827912 140% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.288407844151 0.244688304435 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.104845517882 0.084324248473 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0583380945373 0.0667982634062 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.183326219974 0.151304729494 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0582855232134 0.056905535591 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 50.2224549098 132% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.64 12.4159519038 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.71 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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