Task 2: Some people say that government should spend more money taking care of elderly people while others think that government spending should be spent more on the education of young people. Discuss and give opinion.
It is said that the elderly should be aided by the government but other people believe that it is better for community leaders to allocate more resources into the young’s education. This essay will discuss both those views and from my point of view, I support two opinions equally for a host of reasons.
On the one hand, there is one cause for spending more money on caring for elderly people, which is to create a better life for the elderly, those who have difficulties in particular. To illustrate, older people are the disabled supporting the nation during wartime, and it is necessary for the government to support them by providing pensions and paying the treatment’s costs whenever their injury tends to recur. In addition, if the elderly who is both homeless and poor is more likely to get struggle to make a living, the authorities can provide a roof over their head or offer free medical treatment to encourage them to have a good life.
On the other hand, other people argue that the investment into the young in terms of the education should be a priority because younger generation plays an essential part in a country‘s economy in future. In order to become a well-round person, not only does the government ought to focus on the young’s education but also the schools and families are still good environments for nurturing a child about both knowledge and behaviors. As a result, children bring up with a deep understanding so as to contribute to their society and their country.
To sum up, even though the government is usually expected to support the elderly financially, there exists an idea that investing in the young’s education has more benefits. To my mind, both those views are valid for the above-mentioned reasons.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 195, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
...n essential part in a country‘s economy in future. In order to become a well-round person...
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Line 3, column 491, Rule ID: SO_AS_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'to'
Suggestion: to
...dren bring up with a deep understanding so as to contribute to their society and their c...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, still, well, as to, in addition, in particular, as a result, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1459.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 299.0 315.596192385 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.87959866221 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1583189471 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76233934814 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.56856187291 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 457.2 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 52.771204269 49.4020404114 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 145.9 106.682146367 137% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.9 20.7667163134 144% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.8 7.06120827912 153% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.27303872763 0.244688304435 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0998691980182 0.084324248473 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0916450958088 0.0667982634062 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.162643847363 0.151304729494 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0453660481323 0.056905535591 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.5 13.0946893788 126% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.5 50.2224549098 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.62 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.77 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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