The only way to improve road safety is to give much stricter punishments on
driving offenses. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Research is a very powerful tool for the nation's development. Scientific Research in particular is considered as an important pillar for the health sector and economy as well. As a matter of fact I totally disagree that scientific research should be controlled and funded by the government. The reasons for that this type of research could be a minor priority for the government. Moreover, in developing countries, it might be impossible to fund such a type of research. This will be shown by looking at the lack of priority and the financial problems in the developing countries
Although the government has the economical budget for any sector , It has fundamental priorities such as education and health systems. Furthermore, most of the budget for the majority of the countries is dedicated to the ministry of defense. On the other hand, Scientific research could come at a low rank in the government's priority. For these reasons, companies and funding agencies should be part of the funding process.
In most developing countries, the government has a limited budget and should allocate it in the urgent ministries in the country. For example, the health care system is the most important one and it could be collapsed with the budget insufficiency. Therefore, allocating money for the research funding seems awkward in the poor countries. Although scientific research could be a powerful improvement way of developing countries, the limited budget makes this difficult to happen.
In summary, The governmental budget could have different priorities and this will have a huge impact on the way the research is funded. For that reason, I disagreed with putting scientific research only in the hand of the government. Funding agencies and private companies could make tremendous funding and as a result, the entire country will benefit from this improvement.
- Smart devices have put all of the world s information at our fingertips The benefits of this development are obvious but what are the drawbacks 73
- In many places new homes are needed but the only space available for building them is in the countryside Some people believe it is more important to protect the countryside and not build new homes there What is your opinion about this 67
- News stories on TV and in newspapers are very often accompanied by pictures Some people say that these pictures are more effective than words What is your opinion about this 61
- Many people believe that zoos have no purpose in today s world and should be closed What problems do zoos bring What are the alternatives to zoos if they are closed 73
- Some people say that in all levels of education from primary schools to universities too much time is spent on learning facts and not enough on learning practical skill Do you agree or disagree 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'nations'' or 'nation's'?
Suggestion: nations'; nation's
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Suggestion: ,
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'governments'' or 'government's'?
Suggestion: governments'; government's
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Suggestion: parted
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, look, moreover, so, therefore, well, for example, in particular, in summary, such as, as a matter of fact, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1573.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 299.0 315.596192385 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.26086956522 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1583189471 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98964695054 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 176.041082164 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.458193979933 0.561755894193 82% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 471.6 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.4690757709 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.3125 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6875 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.625 7.06120827912 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0300489864168 0.244688304435 12% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0136686351001 0.084324248473 16% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.025977425343 0.0667982634062 39% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.023174147635 0.151304729494 15% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0198650574956 0.056905535591 35% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.23 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.54 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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