You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.
Write about the following topic:
In many countries, very few young people read newspapers or follow the news on TV. What do you think are the causes of this?
What solutions can you suggest?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
You should write at least 250 words.
In today's world, where the daily news rules and shakes the world every second;It may be quite shocking to know that in many parts of the world, the young generation is far from reading the newspaper or watch news on television. Ever wondered why? The following essay would discuss some of those striking features in detail down below.
Firstly, In this busy world where everyone works like a machine and live lives like a robot, no one has the time to read the newspaper peacefully or watch television for news for hours. Today, especially the Youth can easily access the world news in one click on their phones or Laptops. For example - the Internet revolution has brought world news to everyone on their phones itself where they can easily save time and focus on the news which excites them or is important to them. But which also means lots of eye strain and other problems. Here the solution lies in keeping some good quality time for pure world news. This would not only make sure people are attending to the news with undivided attention, but also this would bring them to their families by spending time together and hence strengthing the family bonds.
The other big factor is illiteracy, due to lack of funds and opportunities, millions of youth in many underdeveloped countries are uneducated or cant afford the newspapers or television.Furthermore, with hungry bellies they barely have any inclination for world news where all they can think of bringing some money to support their families. Again, here government must support these sections of society by providing them basic education free of costs ; basic jobs and make them aware of the importance of world news to them to lead their lives successfully.
In conclusion, though there are many stringent factors in the society for the youth to ignore the importance of news via Newspapers and TV but with a consistent support from govt., they can be made to overcome these hurdles.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 146, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...erdeveloped countries are uneducated or cant afford the newspapers or television.Fur...
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Line 5, column 187, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Furthermore
...ant afford the newspapers or television.Furthermore, with hungry bellies they barely have a...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, hence, may, second, so, for example, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1622.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 331.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.9003021148 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26537283232 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65193901293 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.555891238671 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 499.5 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 88.5526757862 49.4020404114 179% => OK
Chars per sentence: 135.166666667 106.682146367 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.5833333333 20.7667163134 133% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.5 7.06120827912 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.149888631957 0.244688304435 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0552158416596 0.084324248473 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.034567716097 0.0667982634062 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0924109449484 0.151304729494 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0226620053849 0.056905535591 40% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 50.2224549098 105% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.44 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.41 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.