You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.
Write about the following topic:
A healthy person is often described as someone who has a good diet, gets plenty of exercise and avoids stress.
What should people do to stay healthy in your country?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
You should write at least 250 words.
In today's mad busy world, everyone is working like a machine; its not an exaggeration that everyone's health has became the lowest priority causing so many health issues. In reality, our health is paramount and our body is our temple which should be nurtured and taken care of wisely to live a healthy and long life. The following essay would discuss some of the key factors which can help to make any country healthy and happy.
To begin with, this awareness should be started as soon as in primary years of school. All through the school years, Sports and extra curricular activities should be made a mandatory subject just like Maths and Science. Even today, most of parents want their children to become doctors or engineers only as safe carrer options, rather they should be conditioned to understand that kids can be flourished in sports and extra curricular activities too carving a great carrer.
For working class, Companies must encourage and allow employees to take breaks for sports activities to remain fit. They can provide a small gym with basic machines in their campus to save time as well. Moreover, other exercise centers and gyms should also be made affordable for everyone so that everyone can benefit from them.
Furthermore, the government must ensure that countrymen have enough spaces like lawns for elderly to walk, running tracks and parks to play for youth and kids so that they can utilise them and stay healthy. They should also try to hold sports events in the country along with good prizes so to encourage people to participate in them.
Moreover, the goverment authorities also make that citizens are not working overtime and neglecting their healths. They should regulate working hours so that everyone can take out time from their busy schedule to take care of their healths and mental well being. Countries like New Zealand are already leading the way, making only 30 hours a week mandatory for citizens contrary to atleast 40 hours in other parts of the world. Making nutritious foods affordable to common men also would go a long way.
In conclusion, they are several ways a country can become healthy provided its citizen as well as goverment work together to make it happen.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
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Message: Use past participle here: 'become'.
Suggestion: become
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Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
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Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the parents') or simply say ''most parents''.
Suggestion: most of the parents; most parents
...ust like Maths and Science. Even today, most of parents want their children to become doctors o...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, if, moreover, so, well, in conclusion, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 18.0 7.85571142285 229% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1855.0 1615.20841683 115% => OK
No of words: 375.0 315.596192385 119% => OK
Chars per words: 4.94666666667 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40055868397 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.40650969017 2.80592935109 86% => OK
Unique words: 210.0 176.041082164 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.56 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 563.4 506.74238477 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.2095507215 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.9375 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.4375 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.1875 7.06120827912 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.103395532882 0.244688304435 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0378618618341 0.084324248473 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0340655259685 0.0667982634062 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0568926991142 0.151304729494 38% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.017944738124 0.056905535591 32% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.73 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.98 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.