In many countries, schools have severe problems with student behavior. What do you think are the causes of this? What solutions can you suggest?
In some countries, education institutions are facing problems with the student’s attitude and behavior. This essay will analyses the reasons behind such behavior and the measures that can be taken to prevent it.
In my opinion, two main factors are to blame for the behavioral problems of young people at school nowadays. Firstly, the way society works these days affects students’ behavioral patterns. As an example, both parents are working, and they would only have such a limited time for their children. As a result, children lack parental guidance or attention and some of the children even act negatively at school to get notice from their parents, teachers or friends. Secondly, such behaviors might be caused by external influences, such as internet and television. Students, for example, might watch TV shows that use a lot of violence. Consequently, several children think that fighting or teasing their friends is a normal activity…
Student behavior can certainly be improved. I believe that the change must start with parents and teachers. They must devote enough time for the student to understand his strengths and weaknesses and never compare one student with another. Furthermore, teachers should spend time to find that which TV programs are in student’s favorite lists and try to show them ethical aspects of those programs and teach them how to separate good thing from bad ones. Students should also be encouraged to take up activities like gardening and caring for domestic animals. These help in providing opportunities for them to appreciate nature and the other living creatures on this planet.
In conclusion, behavioral problem results from the way society works these days and external parties, such as bad influences from TV shows or video on YouTube. Therefore, it is important for the school and parents to cooperate in guiding the children.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 121, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'analyse'
Suggestion: analyse
... attitude and behavior. This essay will analyses the reasons behind such behavior and th...
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Line 2, column 358, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...lack parental guidance or attention and some of the children even act negatively at school ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, first, firstly, furthermore, second, secondly, so, therefore, for example, in conclusion, in fact, such as, as a result, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1586.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 301.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.26910299003 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16525528304 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74333725098 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.604651162791 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 469.8 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.9324543597 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.125 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8125 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.625 7.06120827912 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.171045475332 0.244688304435 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0588842021743 0.084324248473 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0428102850592 0.0667982634062 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10985053141 0.151304729494 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0378969421946 0.056905535591 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.83 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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