These days, too many people maintain their health by relying on doctors and medicine, rather than by following a healthy lifestyle.
It is a well known fact that nowadays due to various and sometimes dangerous causes that might be observed in the modern environment the general health state of an individual can be imperilled. Some people believe that only one affirmative way to support and maintain health is to totally trust doctors and medicine opinions whereas others think that to acquire a strong health it is absolutely necessary to have a healthful way of life. So, I partly agree with given statement that modern pills and medication can completely solve all negative problems that are inextricably connected with health.
On the one hand, there is an explicit speculation that current medicine has been significantly affected by inextricably fast development of technology which helps to improve the influence of the pills. For example, there are known to be an enormous quantity of various useful pills that not only assist the work of certain human organs but also improve human resistance to the different illnesses. In addition to this, in comparison with past time, the field of medicine has been unquestionably developed which means a large number of high-qualified doctors can easily detect diseases and give useful advice on how to handle health problems.
On the other hand, it is common that mostly all antibiotics contain negative substances that reduce the immune system of an individual while simple things such as running or other helpful activities enhance stamina and general state of health. Physically, we can inherit some illnesses from our parents and it will be really complicated to alter them using medicine whereas a healthy lifestyle might improve the body's drawbacks. For instance, asthma is one of the most common diseases and there were cases when a good lifestyle helped to get rid of this terrible sickness.
In conclusion, after all arguments have been discussed in detail, I suppose it is definitely necessary to find a right balance between consumption of medicine and a healthy lifestyle.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 385, Rule ID: ABSOLUTELY_ESSENTIAL[1]
Message: Use simply 'necessary'.
Suggestion: necessary
...k that to acquire a strong health it is absolutely necessary to have a healthful way of life. So, I...
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Line 2, column 439, Rule ID: PAST_TIME[1]
Message: Did you mean 'pastime'?
Suggestion: pastime
...In addition to this, in comparison with past time, the field of medicine has been unquest...
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Line 2, column 518, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
...en unquestionably developed which means a large number of high-qualified doctors can easily dete...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ber of high-qualified doctors can easily detect diseases and give useful advice o...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...dvice on how to handle health problems. On the other hand, it is common that mos...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, really, so, well, whereas, while, after all, for example, for instance, i suppose, in addition, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1682.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 324.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.19135802469 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24264068712 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81694607424 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.586419753086 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 546.3 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 32.0 20.2975951904 158% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 33.3030028676 49.4020404114 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 168.2 106.682146367 158% => OK
Words per sentence: 32.4 20.7667163134 156% => OK
Discourse Markers: 15.2 7.06120827912 215% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.145780953532 0.244688304435 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0541338820165 0.084324248473 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0486944361225 0.0667982634062 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.083263971654 0.151304729494 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0309888801216 0.056905535591 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.2 13.0946893788 147% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 30.54 50.2224549098 61% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.0 11.3001002004 150% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.41 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.41 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 20.0 9.78957915832 204% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 14.8 10.1190380762 146% => OK
text_standard: 20.0 10.7795591182 186% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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