In some countries, owning a home than renting one is very important for people.
Why might this be the case?
It is often thought that, owning a home is much more accessable rather than renting one in many countries. In my opinion, this is a part of humans inspiration to choice one besides renting a houses can be contributed hassle.
On the one hand, in the comprehensive globe, many individuals are surviving a part of the apartments. To address this approach, there are so valueable influences to spend the amount of avarage money when they prefer to live ina renting one. However, the proportion of people are suffering from designating accommodations. This action will lead to consume small quality of money to inhabit in a apartment. Other evidence that, the humans have to provide good condition to their children's depends in this way they will require competitive salary otherwise they will not have enough force to perform house's rent. Last point is that, although low-price apartment will be available to unemployed and migrated individuals which is relatively supportive to live in unfamiliar countries in a brief lifetime.
On the other hand, owning a house is so signaficant for humans from born to died and this is a great sense of accomplishment compared to the apartment. For instance, most people was capable of building their house in the ancient period. It is often thought that, the uzbek ancestors built houses to make a monument for their generations. Nowadays, the majority of cultural houses has been a memorable destinations since all tha period. This is a great illustration, to prevent people which is a excellent chance to invest their own house to the foreseeable generation if they have adequate condition to create tendency.
In conclusion, renting a accommodation can be suitable for living in a abroad. Although, if people prefer to prevent to be homeless, I convince that, they will have to mobilise full of attentions to inhabit in a same house.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 190, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a house' or simply 'houses'?
Suggestion: a house; houses
...spiration to choice one besides renting a houses can be contributed hassle. On the on...
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Line 3, column 393, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...me small quality of money to inhabit in a apartment. Other evidence that, the hum...
^
Line 5, column 402, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'destination'?
Suggestion: destination
...of cultural houses has been a memorable destinations since all tha period. This is a great i...
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Line 5, column 494, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...llustration, to prevent people which is a excellent chance to invest their own ho...
^
Line 7, column 24, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...te tendency. In conclusion, renting a accommodation can be suitable for livin...
^
Line 7, column 70, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...mmodation can be suitable for living in a abroad. Although, if people prefer to p...
^
Line 7, column 70, Rule ID: DT_JJ_NO_NOUN[1]
Message: Probably a noun is missing in this part of the sentence.
...mmodation can be suitable for living in a abroad. Although, if people prefer to prevent ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, however, if, so, for instance, in conclusion, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 10.4138276553 19% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1571.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 310.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.06774193548 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19604776685 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97339748636 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.535483870968 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 503.1 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.8669385527 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.733333333 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6666666667 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.13333333333 7.06120827912 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.241841436234 0.244688304435 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0812909536649 0.084324248473 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0508966368356 0.0667982634062 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.158624384158 0.151304729494 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.052794633746 0.056905535591 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.86 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.