Many teenagers have their own smartphones. Discuss the advantage and disadvantage of this and give your own opinion.
Many adolescents have own smart devices. This essay describes the main benefit of having smartphone is that it is easy to communicate whereas using smart gadget in excess put some detrimental effect on teenager’s social behavior.
On the one side, parents can keep in touch with their children if they are out of home. There are many advanced features like GPS installed in the phone which can find location. For example, messaging app like Viber which can even locate the place from where young ones do message to their parents. This is the best way for parents to keep an eye on their children and they can talk face to face. It gives them kind of protection to young ones.
On the other side, children do not talk much with others because all the time they are glued with their phones. They like only that fantasy world which cuts them from the real world. For instance, it is common when go to coffee shop, a group of young people sitting around you. They all the time engrossed their phones, what is happening around them is not their business. That is why smartphones create only world for them.
To conclude, it is advantageous for teenagers to keep smartphone with them as security guard; however, they do not care about anything except their own world.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, so, whereas, for example, for instance, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 10.4138276553 10% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1052.0 1615.20841683 65% => OK
No of words: 223.0 315.596192385 71% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.71748878924 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.86434787811 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.30072376607 2.80592935109 82% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 176.041082164 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.596412556054 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 315.0 506.74238477 62% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.0046901633 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.9230769231 106.682146367 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1538461538 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.61538461538 7.06120827912 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.202447494895 0.244688304435 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0751134761657 0.084324248473 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0760900209542 0.0667982634062 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.144093996592 0.151304729494 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0770531786839 0.056905535591 135% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 13.0946893788 72% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 50.2224549098 142% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 11.3001002004 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.8 12.4159519038 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.74 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 78.4519038076 59% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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