In many countries the proportion of older people is steadily increasing.does this tread have more positive or negative effects on society?
In myriads of nations, it is observed that the rate of older people is continuously augmenting. I opine that both sides be considered in the argument for this trend due to elder have more experience and skills and it's also hurt countries development.
To begin with, the principle reason to believe it has a positive outcome is that older people are more experienced and can contribute largely by counselling the young generation. In addition to this, the younger one can take help from them and get expertise in a particular work. For example, if in any organisation having a balance of young and elder than it will achieve success easily having expertise skilled elder and having a younger one who has dynamic nature. Another cogent reason to bolster this trend is elder people can be good companions to kids as young member of the family are busy outside and cannot manage time to share with children. So it can help them to raise in a family environment. Along with this, the child also learns the cultural value of their grandparents. Hence, elder one helps the younger one in organisation development and to handle their children cultivation.
On the contrary, some relevant issue for this trend cannot be ignored. Firstly, it will impact on country's economic development. More elder people means governments have to arrange more money for their pensions. This means a financial loss to that country. Secondly, governments have to support them, for instance, by giving them a discount for the electricity bill, water bill and for another requirement. As a result, the economy of that specific country could suffer. Besides this, a increase unemployment rate as in some field such as nursery parent will not send their kids because of availability of grandparent at home.
I opine, that this trend has the benefit and adverse effect both as a youngster can get tradition value and experience from older. whereas, increasing the rate of older will affect on country's economy.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...reas, increasing the rate of older will affect on countrys economy.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, firstly, hence, if, second, secondly, so, whereas, for example, for instance, in addition, such as, as a result, on the contrary, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.3376753507 204% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1658.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 331.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.00906344411 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26537283232 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75195908631 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.528700906344 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 530.1 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.9766490456 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.1111111111 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3888888889 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.44444444444 7.06120827912 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.223535566564 0.244688304435 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0719609330519 0.084324248473 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0479279327088 0.0667982634062 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.152286139066 0.151304729494 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0249141940208 0.056905535591 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.44 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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