Some people say free time activities for children should be organized by parents. Others say that children should be free to choose what they do in their free time
Some individuals are of the opinion that leisure activites of children should be responsibled for their parents. Nonetheless, others suggest that children should be the ones who determine what to do. Both views possess a degree of accuracy, howerver, I suppose that it is better to let children be free to decide the activities they would do in their unwind time
On the one hand, it would be appropriate for parents to pick up their children’s activities since they profoundly undrestand what is optimal for thei kids’ development. In details, parents can help children get rid of some unfortunate events which may occur during their play time. Consequently, children could play in an assured environment, allowing them to enjoy their free time without any obstacles.
On the other hand, children have their own preference, therfore, it is better to let them decide what activities they would do in their free time. Specifically, each individuals possess diferent characteristics, which would determine the ultimately suitable activities for them. For example, an introverted child may not be interested in some outdoor activities, they may prefer the intellectual one. As a result, it is more suitable for children to decide what they should do in their free time.
To conclude, although this is a controversial topic, I believe that parents should allow kids to freely determine those activities since it could help them be able play the most suitable activities due to their preference, as well as getting experince through negative consiquence they receive
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, if, may, nonetheless, so, well, for example, i suppose, as a result, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 0.0 10.4138276553 0% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1321.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 250.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.284 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97635364384 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99808205358 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 176.041082164 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.524 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 405.9 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 81.7094853735 49.4020404114 165% => OK
Chars per sentence: 132.1 106.682146367 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.0 20.7667163134 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.2 7.06120827912 159% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.509163207367 0.244688304435 208% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.231013301408 0.084324248473 274% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.121368156446 0.0667982634062 182% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.3409371098 0.151304729494 225% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.130573766029 0.056905535591 229% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.64 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.29 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 78.4519038076 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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