The chart below shows information about the use of public transportation in one country, by age group and location of the residents in 2016.
The diagram illustrates the percentage of residents use public transport in a country based on their age and location in 2016. A quick overview of the chart reveals that in big city people who fall into the 31 and 45 age group use public vehicles the most while in other areas the highest percentage of young people use that kind of transport.
Looking at details, the proportion of people between 16 and 30 years old using public transports in other areas made up the highest proportion, at nearly 30%.However, in big city, people aged 31 to 45 used public vehicles the most, which the figure accounted for 65% throughout the time surveyed. The figure for children followed by around 26% in big city which was twice as much as in other place.
In the vicinity, people in early adulthood and middle aged people shared the same figures at 15%. Meanwhile, the figure of old people using public transports in big city was lower than that figure in rural area, with 19% and 10% respectively. Not surprisingly, the over 75 age group was the one that used public transports the least all over the country.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 158, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: However
...p the highest proportion, at nearly 30%.However, in big city, people aged 31 to 45 used...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, look, while, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.15609756098 222% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 33.7804878049 95% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 912.0 965.302439024 94% => OK
No of words: 194.0 196.424390244 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.70103092784 4.92477711251 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73207559907 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51955894495 2.65546596893 95% => OK
Unique words: 106.0 106.607317073 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.546391752577 0.547539520022 100% => OK
syllable_count: 273.6 283.868780488 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 22.4926829268 120% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 68.4260363384 43.030603864 159% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.285714286 112.824112599 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.7142857143 22.9334400587 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.14285714286 5.23603664747 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.28842408989 0.215688989381 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.156528285287 0.103423049105 151% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.12794262952 0.0843802449381 152% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.217000315135 0.15604864568 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.108765075193 0.0819641961636 133% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.2329268293 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.99 61.2550243902 100% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.3012195122 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.28 11.4140731707 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.91 8.06136585366 98% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 40.7170731707 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 17.0 11.4329268293 149% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.9970731707 116% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.