It is inevitable that the traditional culture will be lost as technology develops technology and Traditional culture are incompatible. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this view
The importance of tradition of culture which was always debatable has now become more controversial with many people claiming that technology is beneficial while other reject this notion. The substantial influence of the trend has sparked the controversy over the and potential impact in recent years.I partially agree with this statement this essay will further elaborate my viewpoint in upcoming paragraph.
To commence with, there are married of reasons which will further elaborate this argument but this most preponderant on steam from the factors is that,Nowadays people are alleviating From their traditional culture because they are totally busy in their own field so that they have no time to learn culture, moreover technology is burgeoning day by day and many Masses are using mostly different type of social application like Facebook Instagram so that they can more spend time on internet, that reason demise of culture as well as, those person who lives in their native regions reasons they do not have more knowledge about the regional cultures.
However there are some pitfalls that na however there are some pitfalls that negate These arguments and which can certainly overwhelm the potential influence of their trend but one of the most alarming one is that many number of people acquire more knowledge with the help of technology. More these arguments and which can certainly overwhelm the potential influence of their trend but one of the most alarming one is that many number of people acquire more knowledge with the help of technology. For instance, if any person go to any other country they do not know about their culture and language then with the help of technology they can get more information about regional culture and native languages.
To conclude, according to their arguments aforementioned above, one can reach to a conclusion that the benefits of the traditional culture or instrumental in indeed. Nevertheless it is potential drawback should not be overlooked either .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, look, moreover, nevertheless, so, then, well, while, for instance, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 7.30460921844 205% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1693.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 322.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.25776397516 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23607819155 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74652267168 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.5 0.561755894193 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 542.7 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 40.0 20.2975951904 197% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 161.805245589 49.4020404114 328% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 211.625 106.682146367 198% => OK
Words per sentence: 40.25 20.7667163134 194% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.875 7.06120827912 168% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 5.01903807615 279% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.202458882403 0.244688304435 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0979294616776 0.084324248473 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0635935488461 0.0667982634062 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.139318829476 0.151304729494 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0502735278202 0.056905535591 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 23.5 13.0946893788 179% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 22.42 50.2224549098 45% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 20.1 11.3001002004 178% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.12 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.15 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 20.5 9.78957915832 209% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 18.0 10.1190380762 178% => OK
text_standard: 21.0 10.7795591182 195% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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