It is Invertible dad the traditional culture will be lost as technology develops. technology and traditional culture are incompatible . To what extent do you agree or disagree with the statement
The importance of tradition of culture which was always debatable has now become more controversial with many people claiming that technology is beneficial while other reject this notion. The substantial influence of the trend has sparked the controversy over the and potential impact in recent years.I partially agree with this statement this essay will further elaborate my viewpoint in upcoming paragraph.
To commence with, there are married of reasons which will further elaborate this argument but this most preponderant on steam from the factors is that,Nowadays people are alleviating From their traditional culture because they are totally busy in their own field so that they have no time to learn culture, moreover technology is burgeoning day by day and many Masses are using mostly different type of social application like Facebook Instagram so that they can more spend time on internet, that reason demise of culture as well as, those person who lives in their native regions reasons they do not have more knowledge about the regional cultures.
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- It is inevitable that the traditional culture will be lost as technology develops technology and Traditional culture are incompatible To what extent do you agree or disagree with this view 56
- In some countries at secondary or higher school level there are maybe tow stream of studies Academy of vocational what are the advantage for students and the society of the putting students into two streams at the age of 15 56
- The university now offer the course on the internet so their people can study online is this positive or negative development
- The bar chat representation illustrates the percentage of Australia men and women in variation age groups physical activity in 2020 67
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, moreover, so, well, while, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 41.998997996 55% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 895.0 1615.20841683 55% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 168.0 315.596192385 53% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.32738095238 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.60020574368 4.20363070211 86% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68540794226 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 115.0 176.041082164 65% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.684523809524 0.561755894193 122% => OK
syllable_count: 285.3 506.74238477 56% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 3.0 16.0721442886 19% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 56.0 20.2975951904 276% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 210.442391167 49.4020404114 426% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 298.333333333 106.682146367 280% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 56.0 20.7667163134 270% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 15.3333333333 7.06120827912 217% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 2.0 4.38176352705 46% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.180024154955 0.244688304435 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.123749103116 0.084324248473 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.03816151645 0.0667982634062 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.14620985457 0.151304729494 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.032104448792 0.056905535591 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 31.7 13.0946893788 242% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 6.18 50.2224549098 12% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 7.44779559118 196% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 26.3 11.3001002004 233% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 14.52 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.11 8.58950901804 129% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 78.4519038076 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 20.5 9.78957915832 209% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 24.4 10.1190380762 241% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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