Global warming is one of the most serious issues that the world is facing today. What are the causes of global warming and what measures can governments and individuals take to tackle the issue?
In the world, people’s life has to face to many problems such as sea levels are rising, cloud forests are dying and wildlife is scrambling to keep pace day by day. It can also call is “Global warming” one of the most important factor which affects people and their life. From my point of view, there many causes of global warming, people should be aware of this problem to avoid. But at the same time, governments and individuals must have some measures to take to tackle the issue.
First of all, greenhouse effects which trap the heat and cause the planet to get hotte and Global warming occurs when carbon dioxide (CO2) and other air pollutants and greenhouse gases collect in the atmosphere and absorb sunlight and solar radiation that have bounced off the earth’s surface. On the other hand, some scientists called “climate change “ is the result global warming . Indeed, Humans are increasingly influencing the climate and the earth's temperature by burning fossil fuels, cutting down rainforests. As people know, Tree play an important roles of our life which help to regulate the climate by absorbing CO2 from the atmosphere. However, more and more people cut down forest , that is reason why climate change becomes one of global warming
Because of global warming's serious growth and effects, to have appropriate measures is the most important thing people have to deal with. Every individuals can contribute to save our planet, starting from cutting down on energy use, especially electricity. When coal is burnt to make electricity, it releases a large amount of carbon dioxide into the atmosphere and leads to global warming. Thus, reducing the use of electricity helps to decrease the amount of emissions and prevent disastrous effects. Turning off the unnecessary electric devices, using LED lights bulbs instead,.. are some useful ways to make progress. Secondly, goverments should encourage people protect forest and plant more trees .If people plant trees or plants wherever they can grow, the concern of global warming will be partly controlled. Trees absorb carbon dioxide and give off tons of oxygen during their lifetime. Planting trees is the most effective method to rehabilitate the ecosystem and deal with global warming. To sum up, there are such helpful actions that governments and individuals can do to rescue our Earth from global warming
In conclusion, due to the alarming rate of rising in global temperatures, taking practical measures is necessary for both individuals and governments. It is not only for the purpose of preserving habitat but it also saves our life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, second, secondly, so, thus, as to, in conclusion, such as, first of all, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 22.0 10.4138276553 211% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 59.0 41.998997996 140% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2200.0 1615.20841683 136% => OK
No of words: 426.0 315.596192385 135% => OK
Chars per words: 5.16431924883 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.54310108192 4.20363070211 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62547800821 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 245.0 176.041082164 139% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.575117370892 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 669.6 506.74238477 132% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 68.0278987905 49.4020404114 138% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.789473684 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4210526316 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.94736842105 7.06120827912 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.01903807615 239% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.274928480154 0.244688304435 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0766682197806 0.084324248473 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0794509590132 0.0667982634062 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.164301721805 0.151304729494 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0520528053483 0.056905535591 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.73 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 108.0 78.4519038076 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.