Many people continue to use cars and motorcycles even though they know that they are bad for the environment.
Why is this? What can be done to reduce the use of these vehicles?
It has been observed that being aware about the main reason of pollution, most of the people prefer to travel through their cars and motorcycle.
This is the primary reason which is affecting our environment. People often use their own vehicles because of convenience and time. There are some solution which can reduce the usage of these vehicles like using public transport or electric vehicles.
With the unprecedented development in the field of science and technology, automobile sector has increased drastically. With this, there are many options available for the consumers. To be clearer, there are various models available ranging from high to low price for the customers. Additionally, with the easy and low EMI system, people are able to afford their own vehicles. Although with the increased in the purchase of vehicles air pollution is also rising, people choose convenience over environment. For example, a person prefers riding is own car to the office because it will not only make them comfortable but also they will able to manage their time. This would not be possible if we choose any public transport.
There are various measures which could make less vehicles on road and eventually it will reduce pollution. Firstly, people should be encourage to use public transports. This will not only help in reducing air pollution, but it will also help to reduce the rate of accidents. To be clearer, if people use public transports instead of their own vehicles than there would decrease in the traffic and hence less pollution and accidents. Secondly, using electric vehicles will also help in reduction of pollution. Since electric vehicles are environment friendly, pollution will automatically fall.
To conclude, although being aware about the fact that pollution is increasing day by day, mankind prefer to use their own vehicles because of convenience. There are better alternatives to use like public transport or electric car. Also government would play vital role if they imposes some policies or laws to use public transport or by providing subsidies to electric cars.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 6, column 45, Rule ID: FEWER_LESS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun vehicles is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
...e are various measures which could make less vehicles on road and eventually it will...
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Line 6, column 134, Rule ID: SHOULD_BE_DO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'encouraged'?
Suggestion: encouraged
...ce pollution. Firstly, people should be encourage to use public transports. This will not...
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Line 6, column 144, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'using'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'encourage' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: using
...on. Firstly, people should be encourage to use public transports. This will not only h...
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Line 8, column 232, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
... like public transport or electric car. Also government would play vital role if the...
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Line 8, column 278, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[2]
Message: The pronoun 'they' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'impose'
Suggestion: impose
...overnment would play vital role if they imposes some policies or laws to use public tra...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, hence, if, second, secondly, so, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 19.0 8.3376753507 228% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1766.0 1615.20841683 109% => OK
No of words: 337.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.24035608309 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28457229495 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73979331956 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.486646884273 0.561755894193 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 559.8 506.74238477 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.7082704985 49.4020404114 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.3 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.85 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.55 7.06120827912 50% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.272275859724 0.244688304435 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0883682967225 0.084324248473 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0443623198086 0.0667982634062 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.155307390391 0.151304729494 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0458871820197 0.056905535591 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.82 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.9 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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