Some people think that it is important to use leisure time for activities that improve the mind, such as reading and doing word puzzles.
Other people feel that it is important to rest the mind during leisure time.
Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Currently there is a contentious argument that whether the leisure time should be used to improve cognitive skills or should be spend in resting. In this contemplation, I will discuss both the viewpoints and then conclude my opinion.
Activities such as solving Sudoku puzzles, reading, and doing crossword helps to challenge our brain to outperform. Therefore, the neurosensory system works harder when faced with a novice signal that was never seen before. For instance, a research found that kids who were involved in cognitive activities that requires brain exercise were found to be more intelligent then students who spend time in sleeping.
On the contrary, others feel that it is more important to rest for a while before being continuously involved in some kind of thought process. Due to this reason people are researching about the benefits of meditation which involves sitting idle and focusing on breathing. For example, numerable research articles are published that prove the beneficial power of providing rest to our brain by meditation exercise. Other activities such as doing yoga, going for a holiday and playing guitar are some of the relaxing activities that people often indulge in for relaxing their brain. I believe that it is more important to take a break and rethink before starting the day. People of 21st century are already leading a busy life filled with distractions, multitasking and engagements. Therefore, I believe that it is important to rest the mind while spending time in leisure. Relaxing activities might vary from person to person but the time should be spend at ease with minimal brain activity.
In conclusion, I reiterate that resting our mind is quintessential for our brain to achieve the maximum working capacity. Our brains also needs to recharge after a busy work schedule and rewire itself before starting a new day.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, then, therefore, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, kind of, such as, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1583.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 303.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.22442244224 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17215713816 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79815830497 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.57095709571 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 492.3 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 27.8083920187 49.4020404114 56% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 105.533333333 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.86666666667 7.06120827912 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.269620690002 0.244688304435 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0823574164872 0.084324248473 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0624525725631 0.0667982634062 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134404997769 0.151304729494 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0803313295517 0.056905535591 141% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.11 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.